This OC was submitted by rainbowkitty1220.
Name: Fawnkit/Fawnpaw/Fawndance
Nickname: Fawn (Rarely)
Clan/Rank: sunclan and kit/apprentice/warrior
Apprentice(s): N/A
Any apprentices at all when she's a warrior?
Gender: She-cat
Looks: has a light brown back, tail, and head with white spots on her back and white stomach, paws, and muzzle. She has ember green eyes and light pink inside her ears.
Embers are dying flames... they aren't green...
Personality: N/A
Where is the personality?!
Mate/Crush/Kit(s): foxcall(Sunclan leader)
Um... wouldn't his name be FoxSTAR?
Sexuality: straight but can stir away everyonce in a while but thats like once in many moons.
Age: well im writing a book threw her life so idk she could be rated at 7 moons?
7 moons? She's a warrior, right? 7 moons is just barely an apprentice... her final/current in character age is what I'm asking for...
Parents: Oakark (father), pineneedle (mother)
Siblings: Birchkit/birchpaw/birchspot(sister) Tigerkit/tigerpaw/tigertooth
Bio/Backstory: (pg version yes it has two versions ) she was relaly close with her siblings until they were 5 moons old. There was a little in the nursery wih them, two toms, Birchkit loved one and fawnkit without knowing liked the other. When they were older both toms started talking more and more with her. Birchpaw learned her crush liked fawnpaw instead and tried harder to make him like her with no prevail. She soon grew to hate her sister and drifted away never even acknowledging her. Fawnpaw on the other hand hated the tom that she didnt like back. She didn't like how much he tried, or persisted. She soon grew up with foxcall the other brother and the tom she didn't like kept trying even when she had Foxcalls kits.
Y'know, now I wanna hear the other version...
Relation to any main characters?: None
Likes: relaxing, safety, foxcall, talking with tigertooth.
Dislikes: N/A
Wut... why is there nothing here?
Strengths: convincment, hunting, motivating cats.
Manipulation is what you mean by "convincment" I don't even think "convincment" is a word.
Weaknesses: hiding her scent, fighting rouges older or bigger then her, keeping bad cats away from herself.
Extras: N/A
Um, so I guess I give this OC:
50% Original
50% ChangeableAlso, I couldn't really find a picture for her...
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