Backstabber {under heavy editing}

Chapter Eight / Edited

Tomika's POV

We walk in front of the door and then they randomly open. "Good evening miss Summer Alias Vangaline Hathaway Evans." A man in a fancy suit greeted. "Dave, I said you can just call me Summer and I prefer the last name of my mother." "My apologies." The man says and we walk in.

"Who was that?" I ask. "Just one of the many butlers." Summer says. "Good evening miss Summer." A lady in a maid suit greeted. "Good evening Eva, can you tell the chef to prepare dinner for six?" Summer greets and asks. "Yes of course, but which chef?" The maid asks. "Any." Summer says and we continue walking.

"Let's start with the first floor." Summer says.

In the first room there is no door, but there's a long table with like a billion chairs. A giant crystal chandelier hanging from the ceiling. "This is the dining room."

In the second room it has two doors, there's a big disco ball, speakers and long tables and everything that is usually in a party. "This is the party room."

In the third room it has two doors, there's a shiny crystal chandelier and chairs and tables. "The ball room."

The third room has a door, and inside was a huge kitchen with a bajilloin chefs. "Kitchen." We all say in unison.

"So Summer, why are the places in rooms? How about all these other sp-!!!" Mr. Finn falls but we don't hear a crash.

We all look down to see two construction workers carrying him. "We're making a gigantic indoor pool!" Summer shouts at him. The construction workers drop him and he gets up and out of the pool.

"Moving on to the second floor." Summer says and we start climbing up the stairs. "Let's start with my room." She says.

We enter a very pink room. The walls were pink, the ceiling was pink, the rug covering the whole floor was pink even her master bed had pink bed sheets!

I started clutching the arm of Zack. This is to pink for me.

Zack's POV

Tomika clutched my arm, I won't get mad her. I also don't like the color pink. But if Summer likes it. I like it. I also like it when Tomika clutches my arm, makes me feel manly,

Summer had a walk in closet that looked like a mall! There was even a hotdog stand inside and an escalator! At least her bathroom didn't have a hotdog stand and escalator.

But it had a trampoline.

She had a display of a collection of hats, and another display of a collection of dolls. On her bed was a lot of stuffed toys. And there was another walk in closet. "What's there?" Freddy asked about to open the door, until Summer slapped his hand. "Don't go in! Let us move on to my brother's room!"

We exit her room and enter her brother's room. It was very blue. Walls, blue, ceiling, blue, rug covering the whole floor, blue, master bed, blue bed sheets. A walk in closet with a hamburger stand and an escalator!

The bathroom had a trampoline too.

He had a display of a collection of jerseys, and another display of a collection of action figures. On his bed were pillows shaped like boats, cars, trucks and planes. There was another walk in closet. "Can we go in there?" Freddy asks. "Yes." Summer replies.

We walk in and see the most amazing thing in the world. A video game and comic collection. All Arranged. "Woaw! Your brother has dc comics since the year 19 something?!" I said in amazement.

So many video games, so many comics.

We exit his room and enter the room of Summer's parents. It was white. A master bed. Two walk in closets. A shiny bathroom without a trampoline. A display of awards and another display of awards. And huge family pics hanging on the wall.