:) I thought it was pretty good.
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-Zasey
Morning Star (continuation of the twilight saga)
Chapter 2 Part 3
Alice Cullen
"No!" she shouted "Stop!" She looked like she was in so much pain, so helpless. I couldn't do anything. I was just standing there in the trees unable to move. I watched in horror as she fell backwards, hitting her head on the ground. Jane tilted her head to the left with a smile on her face and watched in delight. It blacked out. The vision was blotchy, Jake must have been there. 'Crap!' I thought 'Dang dog!' The vision finally came back. She was digging her finger nails into the ground, and then she stopped moving completely. She was lying there lifeless. I heard weeps coming from behind me, but no one was there. I felt myself move forward. Everyone in the field except Renesmee stared at me, shocked. It blacked out. I came back from my vision, Nessie was shaking me and shouting my name. I looked at her.
"Renesmee!" I shouted, pulling her into a tight hug. "Are you okay? Does anything feel hurt? Are you okay?" I asked her.
She pulled away from me and looked at me "I should be asking you the same thing! Why couldn't you answer me?" she asked in an annoyed tone.
"I...I don't know! I just couldn't, I didn't hear you. It was the vision."
"What was the vision of?"
"Nothing, nothing. Where's Edward?"
"I'm not sure, I thought you would know. When I woke up no one else was here."
"They must still be hunting."
I looked out the window. There was Jake, he phased and pulled on his sweats. I sat on the couch and put my face in my hands.
Ok so im switching povs in the middle of the part. And it was too short to be a single part. sooo yeah ;)
Morning Star (continuation of the twilight saga)
Chapter 2 part 3 and a half? idk
Jacob Black
"Jakie!" she shouted, jumping into my arms.
"I take it you missed me?"
"Duh!" I laughed.
"Good! I missed you to!"
I looked at Alice. She was sitting on the couch with her head in her hands. I looked at Nessie, "Nessie, what's wrong with Alice?" I whispered. There was really no point in whispering because she heard it anyway. "I'm not entirely sure. She had a vision and has been like that ever since. She won't tell me what the vision was." She told me, her eyebrows furrowed.
I sighed "We'll figure out soon enough."
"Can we hunt? Please? I'm hungry."
"Ok we can hunt, but let's find everyone else and have them come see Alice."
"Ok. Let's go!"
I turned to Alice "We will try to find them soon." She nodded.
I set Nessie on the ground and held her hand, we walked through the front door and towards the woods. I stopped to phase.
"Don't look." I told her
"I won't." She turned her head away. I slipped my sweats off and phased. I nudged her with my snout to let her know I was done. She jumped on my back and we started to follow everyone's scent. It was hard they all went different ways once we got deeper into the woods. Nessie recognized Edward's scent and we followed his trail for about three miles north, then it turned around. So we followed it south, and then west, and then north, until we found Edward, Bella, Emmet, and Carlisle. Emmet and Edward were arm wrestling, and Bella and Carlisle were watching. I let Nessie slide off my back and made sure she landed on the ground safely. I walked behind a tree and phased, quickly put my sweats on, and walked back out to stand next to Nessie.
"You guys should know, Alice had a vision, she wouldn't say what but she had her head in her hands. We came to send Edward." I told them.
"Crap! She always tells her visions, unless they're so bad she can't say them!" He mumbled before he ran off. Carlisle, and Emmet followed close behind.
"Why did you bring Nessie? Couldn't she have stayed with Alice?" Bella asked me.
"Well, Alice would barely move, and Nessie wanted to hunt."
"Don't take long." She said before running off.
"Well Ness, it's just you and me, let's go." I smiled at her, she smiled back.
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Morning Star (continuation of the twilight saga)
Teen FictionThis is a continuation of Stephenie Meyer's Twilight books. It tells about Renesmee's life as she grows and her relationship with Jake. Other problems with unknown vampires become a problem.