Weird (May 12, 2010)
It has been two days since I saw that strange girl. I haven't stopped thinking of her since then. I don't know why. I have been boarding the train to work for the past 3 years and I've probably seen hundreds of faces there. Why would she stand out? Was it the wonder in her eyes? Her strange, unblinking gaze? The almost unnoticeable line of silver tears sliding down her left cheek? Or the almost inappropriately colorful and oversized shoulder bag she was carrying? Was it the thin sliver of dark hair on the side of her face that escaped the unruly bun of hair beneath her hat? Maybe it was the way she just stood there even as the other passengers stumbled their way around her. Was it all of these? Or the simple fact that it seemed so ordinary for me to notice and remember all these things from someone I barely knew? Barely? What a funny word. Because as far as my sanity allows me to know, I've never seen, more so known this woman before.
What the heck is happening to me?!
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NOTE:
So there. Those four chapters started this whole story. It took me four years to write the whole story on paper and a couple of months to finally type it down.
The chapters are short for a reason. The whole story can be a bit complicated so I try to simplify the chapters. Someone told me I could expound it but looking at the amount of time it took me to write this whole thing,I'd have to think real hard. Haha
Although the chapters are short, rest assured that there will be a lot of parts and a lot of chapters.
These first four chapters play an important role to this story because these are my "muse chapters". I wrote these without any plot or idea. These four chapters led this whole story. They were almost exactly the same as when I wrote them back in 2012. I say almost because I went and made a few tense changes.
I hope anyone reads this. Even a single soul will motivate me to publish everything else. :)
This is finished so don't worry, I will not leave you hanging.
Feel free to comment about anything. I know it's not much at this point but any feedback will be appreciated.
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