Chapter 13
Musings Over Coffee
-2010-
Gently blowing the steam rising from the coffee I was drinking, I thought of the seemingly ordinary yet somewhat different commute I had that day. I was standing inside the train and just in time before the doors closed, I caught a glimpse of wide-eyed wonder on an unfamiliar yet hard-not-to-notice face. I didn't know what that meant but I couldn't stop thinking about that girl all morning. Who was she and why was she looking at me like that?
Chapter 14
Weird
-May 12, 2010-
It has been two days since I saw that strange girl. I haven't stopped thinking of her since then. I don't know why. I have been boarding the train to work for the past 3 years and I've probably seen hundreds of faces there. Why would she stand out? Was it the wonder in her eyes? Her strange, unblinking gaze? The almost unnoticeable line of silver tears sliding down her left cheek? Or the almost inappropriately colorful and oversized shoulder bag she was carrying? Was it the thin sliver of dark hair on the side of her face that escaped the unruly bun of hair beneath her hat? Maybe it was the way she just stood there even as the other passengers stumbled their way around her. Was it all of these? Or the simple fact that it seemed so ordinary for me to notice and remember all these things from someone I barely knew? Barely? What a funny word. Because as far as my sanity allows me to know, I've never seen, more so known this woman before.
What the heck is happening to me?!
Chapter 15
2010
Dylan forced himself to stop thinking of her. Everything about his life is weird. He's used to it. He hates rifts and dreads May 10 of each year. It's because rifts seem to have a holiday around that time.
That's all the excitement he gets from that date.
Headaches.
Nothing more.
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