Mr. Nerd Boy (Mark Tuan)

Rewriting

Hello guys!

I was thinking of rewriting this book (it is super bad and confusing) I've done it

I am not sure how long it will take to rewrite, but to help me out, can you guys comment (on this chapter) the confusing parts? I finally "rewritten/edited" this book

An example is how Suga helped Mark and Lizzie escape, but somehow working at "Suga and Spice" and not recognizing anyone. (I remember this from a comment and I slap myself everyday because of my stupidity lol not really but you know) I fixed it

Since I am a lazy butt, I will most likely change some names. If there is a "Junior" that I missed tell me so I could change it to Jinyoung

Please do comment the confusing parts or parts that seem somewhat illogical! It'll help me a lot. Hopefully I cleared some things up

When I start rewriting, you can read this story again, but I don't think its necessary. No you don't

If there happens to be a plot change in this book, then I will recommend you to reread (but there shouldn't be any). There isn't

I will try to rewrite this story during my spring break (in a couple of weeks). It's almost over T.T

Thank you for reading this story!

lol the bold is "future me"