Note from the editor.
This is the original manuscript and is what I'm editing from. If you can't wait for the next chapter to be edited and released (I don't blame you), you can just keep on reading through this. I am only changing sentence structure, tense, and spelling and grammatical errors; but the plot doesn't change a bit. :-) (It will pick up right where the chapter left off so you don't have to search.) Enjoy!CHAPTER 15
(TrisPOV)
"You guys ready to be beautified?" Lily, Christina's sister asked as she pulled up in the school parking lot. She drove a gray Ford Escape.
"Yeah! Come on Tris!" Christina climbed into the back seat so that I could follow her. The leather seats were comfortable. The whole ride home we sang Taylor Swift songs. I laughed when Love Story came on. We screamed out the lyrics. By the time we got to there house we all were laughing our heads off.
Lily ran up the stairs to her room to get makeup. Christina pulled me into her room. "Let's get our dresses on first!" She handed the bag my black sparkle dress was in to me."Here I will go into the bathroom to change."
I stood there looking at the black fabric. It was beautiful. I undressed and pulled on the dress. It fit perfectly! "Christina!" I called. She came out of the bathroom with her blue dress on.
"Ah! Trissy you look beautiful! Lily! Come in we are ready!" Lily walked in and gasped.
"You two look like princesses! Do you both have princes?" We nodded. Lily curled my hair and fixed it up on my head. She put black make up on me. When I opened my eyes and looked at the mirror the girl that stared back at me was gorgeous. I couldn't stop thanking Lily. When she finished Christina we all jumped up and down. Eek!
The doorbell rang just as I finished putting on my death heels. "Okay I am going to let the boys in then you two walk down the stairs when I call. You ready?" Lily asked and we nodded. She ran downstairs and opened up the front door. "Alright come on down!" Lily called up to us. I took a deep breath then me and Christina linked arms and began to walk down the stairs. The moment Will and Tobias saw us there mouths hung open. I wanted to laugh, but kept a simple smile on my face. "You guys look great! Have fun!" Lily called as we all hugged. I kissed Tobias. He was wearing black dress pants and a purple button up shirt. His skin looked tan which brought out the blue in his eyes.
"You look handsome." I said as I linked arms with him.
"You look beautiful as usual." I smiled as Tobias opened my door for me to get in. Christina and Will sat in the back seat. We all were silent during the ride to school. The dance was hosted in our gymnasium. At the front doors a girl in a pink dress took our tickets. The theme was starry night.
Our gym was covered in little white Christmas lights. They were playing Radioactive by Imagine Dragons.me and Christina started singing while our dates got us punch. "I'm Radioactive radioactive!" We screamed and started spinning in circles giggling. Tobias came and taped my shoulder may I have this dance. The music changed to All of Me by John Legend.
I took his hand and we walked out to the middle of the dance floor. Couples had come and started slow dancing. I put my arms around Tobias's neck while he wrapped his arms around my waist. I hummed the tune of the song and rested my head on his chest. I smiled, closed my eyes, and listened to Tobias whisper the song into my ear.
"What would I do without your smart mouth? Drawing me in, and you kicking me out. You've got my head spinning, no kidding. I can't pin you down. What's going on in that beautiful mind I'm on your magical mystery ride. And I am so dizzy, don't know what hit...cause all of me loves all you. All your curves and all your edges. All your perfect imperfections." He sang to me.
The song ended so we met with Will and Christina at the snack bar. " You guys are such a cute couple! Want anything to drink?" Christina said. I was thirsty so I took a plastic cup and filled it with punch. It's taste was different. A good different though.
"Want some?" I asked Tobias as I filled my cup back up. He shook his head no and started talking to Will about football. Me and Christina danced around until another slow song came on. Tobias and Will seemed so deep into there conversation I decided not to bother them. I heard someone clear there throat behind me. I turned and saw Al standing there. He was playing Paris in our play.
"Hey Al." I said. He looked nervous.
"Hey Tris want to dance?" He asked and I wasn't going to say no. I handed Christina my punch it was my fourth cup. We walked to the dance floor and he held me close. To close for me, but I just went with it. He wasn't as tall as Tobias. "Tris?"
"Hmm?"
Instead of asking a question like I thought he would he leaned towards me. He tried to kiss me! I jumped back out of his arms and slapped him hard. Al stood staring at me.
"I already have a boyfriend. That is Four. I am sorry Al." I walked away leaving poor Al. Christina saw me then her happy face turned to a worried look. "You okay?"
I wasn't going to tell anyone what happened. I promised myself. "Yeah." I took the cup back and started to refill it again. My head hurt and I felt dizzy. It seemed that I had the urge to giggle a lot. I stumbled when I walked. Tobias seemed to notice my stumbling and held his hand out. "Tris are you okay? Hey! Are you listening to me?" I giggled again.
"Four! You look so handsome! You know you arn't the nicest person ever. Guess what? I am not that nice either! That's why I like you!" I started laughing.
Four started talking to Christina, "Give me a cup of punch." She did so and Tobias smelled the cup. "It's been spiked. She's high. Come on Tris let's get you home. We have an hour or so till Uriah's party." I tried to walk towards him, but decided to sit on the floor and laugh. "Oh for god's sake I will just carry you." Tobias picked me up.
Christina decided she was going to stay inside with Will. "Text me later tell how she is doing." Christina yelled as we walked out
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Divergent High: What if [BeingEdited]
FanfictionAbout what life would be if the Divergent gang went back to high school. Tris is a sophomore and she lives with a big secret. Her brother, Caleb, beats her at home. Four a Junior runs into her one day, literally, and becomes interested in her.