Redfang's Quest-Warriors

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   I grasped a tortoiseshell she-cat by the tail and yanked her off of Sparrowtail. She screeched and spun, glaring deep into my eyes. I just stared at her. She looked too much like Morningkit, from her dark blue eyes to her dark tortoiseshell pelt. Before I knew it I was on the ground, being ripped apart. I yowled and pummeled her belly, scoring her nose as she leapt away. I hissed and tore her ear, splitting the edge. She hit me again with a furious blow. I staggered, but I was prepared, I could stand Dodge's blow, he was the best fighter in the woods. I roared and rammed into her, pinning her. I slashed at her belly and bit her throat and ripped backwards. She choked, faded, and was gone. I spat blood and fur and pelted off to fight more. Volefur was pinned, but Bluemoon was already racing to help. I saw Ivymoon snapping another cat's spine, she turned out to be an incredible fighter. Lowmoss was biting a small cat's shoulder. Redwillow was reared up and wrestled a black tom a little bigger than her. I raced behind the tom and wiped his paws out from under him. He yowled and landed hard on his back. Redwillow split him from throat to tail, and he died within a few moments. She dipped her head in thanks, before scrabbling away to help. We were winning! A large weight brought me down. I scrabbled free to see a huge she-cat, larger than Dodge. I raised my hackles and spat. She chuckled. "You'll never win. Your so tiny" she laughed. I snarled and leapt on her back, sinking teeth and claws in. She grunted and with a few bucks I released. She grabbed my scruff and tossed me away. I tumbled, but despite the pain, I got up. There was a bloodstain where I skidded. I shook myself and rushed to her, Biting her ear and tearing it off. She hissed and slashed my muzzle, and tried to hit me, but I ducked, slithered under her, and hooked her belly. I reared and threw my head underneath her, launching her away. I growled and rushed her, digging my claws deep in between her shoulders and raking them slow along her spine. She howled and bolted from beneath my paws, but I was faster. I grabbed her tail and yanked her back, shoving her down. I scored her eye, then slit her throat. I looked up from her body, and licked her blood off my paw with a grimacing smile. I watched as Dodge thrusted a tabby and white she-cat off him and slit her shoulder. My body was now glistening scarlet, most of the blood from my enemies. I still ached everywhere, I knew I had some nasty wounds. Lowmoss finished off a Sandy colored tom with her jaws around his throat. I led a truly vicious clan. Then I turned. The nursery! Mistypath! There was a black and white tom along with two tabbies trying to break into the nursery, but Soko was standing guard, doing her best, along with Sparrowtail as my daughter kitted inside. I snarled and grasped a tabby Tom's flanks and yanked him back. He yowled in Surprise and whipped around at me, yellow eyes flaring. I scored his muzzle with both paws as he turned and cow-kicked me with both hind paws. I didn't even budge. I thrusted him to the ground and bit his foreleg, and dragged him through the dirt, directing Blaze to finish him off. Soko was being beaten by a large white she-cat. I raced over and grabbed her neck and snapped her spine. Soko dipped her head to me and continued her fight. I caught Acefire's pelt ripping through the clearing. I followed her gaze. I was horrified. Ashglow was pinned by the throat, his thrashing slowing. I tensed and bolted for his enemy, and I ripped him off. Me and Acefire pummeled and mauled him, before I left Acefire with the badly mauled cat and raced to Ashglow. I licked his wounds furiously. He blinked at me and managed to limp a few steps. I supported him. "I need to see my kits before I die." He puffed. I nod, choking back a wail. I was about to lose my young, loyal deputy. He stalked over to Mistypath and looked down at his kits. He fell down, aching. "I love you, Mistypath. Tell our kits I love them too." He mewed. "I love you too, Redfang. After Jinx was gone you felt like a mother to me." His voice was hardly more than a whisper now, "tell Acefire I love her more than anything on this Earth. She was the best sister, and best friend I could ask for" he choked, staring at me. "Okay, Ashglow" I mew. My eyes shone with grief. Mistypath yowled. "I will never forget you, Ashglow. I love you" she cried. "I'll be okay, I can see Jinx ready to welcome me already." He meowed. His eyes closed and his breathing stopped. There was a flash of light and Jinx appeared, a starry version, and Ashglow's spirit rose and padded away, bouncing around like a kit with his mother. Jinx nodded at me before she turned and padded away with her son. I turned and ran to tell Acefire. Dodge crouched by her, resting his tail on her shoulders to comfort her. "Ashglow's gone, isn't he?" She sobbed. I nodded. "He told me to tell you he loves you more than anyone in this world, and you are the best sister and friend anyone could have." I touched my nose to hers, "first my mother, then my brother. Who's next, my mentor?" She cried, thrusting her muzzle in between her paws. StrongClan had fled. "It will be okay." I assured her. "Everything will be okay"