Glow No More: by ellie_the_author
Remember, these are just my opinions, and feel free to argue with or agree with me on any points I make.
Alright, so, this is a poetry book. And, I don't know that much about poetry in terms of formatting and whatever. Overall, I'd say everything looks pretty good. It's got a lot of variety and fun poems, poems for any type of mood. It's cool that you post submissions, and have that q/a. Add's to the mood.
My one thing is that you don't seem to capitalize I's after the first. I don't know if this is a personal choice, but I feel like those should be capitalize.
Another thing I noticed was just that some of the poems just felt a little simple for me. More personal opinion here. Kinda just, 'let's rhyme words' type of poetry. I'm only saying that because I've read a lot of books, many with some hardcore words. Maybe wouldn't hurt to try some other forms of poetry. Experiment. Surprise us.
But I did really like the poem Unmasked Reality. That one was pretty damn good.
Summary
Pros:
Uh, basically everything about your book
Cons:
The capitalizing of the I's
The simplicity of it (again, more personal opinion)
So, if anyone down for a good poetry book, check out Glow No More. You won't be disappointed.
YOU ARE READING
Hood's Book Reviews (closed)
RandomWant your book reviewed with real critiques? Want votes from getting your book reviewed? Then request me to read your story, and I will give a review in a timely and fair manner. Closed for catch up
