Saving Winter: by CreativeDelinquents
Remember, these are just my opinions, and feel free to argue with or agree with me on any points I make.
Well, CreativeDelinquents, I don't have that much to say. I personally don't like stories like this, with the massive abuse and whatever. But you did a pretty good job at it. The grammar, spacing, and punctuation, were all correct. The plot moved forward well, the pacing wasn't rushed, and the characters were written believably.
Now, basically the only thing I have to say in terms of critiques is that one chapter where the mother is talking with that super long speech, could probably be broken down with other characters talking in between. Or maybe into multiple chapters. It was just really, really, long.
So, I think you have a solid story overall. Again, this type of stuff isn't my cup of tea. But I think it's really well done, and think that Winter is indeed a character worth saving.
Summary
Pros:
The entire story
Cons:
The mother's speech was super long.
If you wish to see if Winter is worthy of saving, and can survive the ordeal of past and present, then come check out Saving Winter.
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