Daughter On Sale !! by: Laila-Manju
Remember, these are just my opinions. Feel free to argue with or disagree with any points I make.
Let's begin. The intro is strong. We see why the main character is stuck in her situation and the husband she's being forced to. Rather good pace to the beginning.
The overall story is.......odd. To me personally. While the grammar and spelling are mostly correct, there are weird spaces between everything. For instance the dialogue looks like, " What ? " which is just too much spacing. It should look more like "What?"
I also just find the entire thing to be uncomfortable. Again, more personal. But she's married to a man who the audience barely knows about for most of the book, and is constantly raped by him. And she isn't really like......scarred as I would think she should be. But, again, just my opinion.
I guess that it's about an Indian couple makes it interesting, but there's really nothing else that makes it unique compared to other edgy stories like this.
Summary
Pros:
Correct spelling
Diverse cast
Strong intro
Cons:
Weird spacing
Odd way to set up a story like this
If you're down to see a woman be sold and deal with her struggles as a wife, then read Daughter On Sale !! And see how their romance blossoms.
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