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JUDGE: Lily-B28 - almost no mistakes, easy words to understand. - compared to your other books they are somewhat the same but I feel like this compared to others work is still unique. - I do know these characters from when I watched them as a kid, but you did an amazing job describing them and giving a bit of a backstory and through out even the first few chapters it really gave me an idea of who they were, and later on how they changed. - easy to read/follow. - this kind of book isn't my go to, but I did find it interesting and somewhat intriguing, i understand why it has so many reads! There is amazing dicription words and vivid imagery going through my head while reading this book, well done.
JUDGE: anonymous GRAMMAR
a few odd constructions, but nothing very distracting (two dialogue tags in the same sentence/clover asked perplexed and the blond(e) gestured with an open palm.
UNIQUENESS OF THE PLOT
Haven't a clue on this type of fanfict but the story flowed and there was a plot
CHaracter building
not sure if these characters will have an arc as they are pretty established but each seemed to have their own speaking voice.
