Judge: RomanceFanatic1 Grammar: This book has very very very few mistakes I would even dare to say none existent, but they are there and sadly I had to go with the 4. I'm pretty sure if the author gives it a once over the grammar would become perfect. :) Character Building: This book only has 5 chapters but I can honestly it was enough to judge on these criteria :) The character built up is perfect. It leaves a really strong impression to the readers especially me. In the short 5 chapters I fell in love with Laura, and I could even see myself being friends with her :) Writing Style: Not only the writing style was unique, easy to follow it was perfect. I loved the way the writer wrote this book almost like a song. I was very surprised when I started reading. You don't find writing like this very often :) The uniqueness of the Plot: The plot of this story completely differs in every aspect. There's a little similarity in the forced marriage, but honestly, the girl is a Muslim. Is something you see in that religion, but the writer managed to make her unique and her own. A really good job. Overall Enjoyment: This book is amazing, 5 chapter wasn't nearly enough. I was left needing more. I fell in love with the character and the story. I am reading this book until the end. Totally a page turner!
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Judge: RomanceFanatic1 Grammar- The story had very noticeable mistakes. I had to stop reading and re-read the sentence to try and decipher what the writer wanted to tell. Character Building- There were a few slip-ups on character discovery, but they were very little so don't get discouraged by it. Writing Style- The writing style was very unique and easy to follow, a really good job on the writing style. The uniqueness of the Plot- The story was really unique and completely differs in every aspect. I don't think I have read a story similar to this one. It's about corruption in a totally new and inventive way :) Overall Enjoyment: I enjoy reading this story. Keep up the good work!
