1:2 - freakingcookies
JUDGE: Brooklyn3433
Grammar: The story is very well written and easy to read. There was only one reoccurring mistake that I noticed; run-on sentences. Other than that, the grammar had a nice flow.
Character Building: I was able to read the original chapters that the author had, and the characters were interesting... But they were also confusing, leaving me to wonder who they were.
Writing Style: The overall writing style is exceptional and easy to follow. The way the author describes things makes the story worth reading.
Plot Uniqueness: The plot is original in the way it is portrayed, yet it is not completely different from other books in the mystery genre.
Overall Enjoyment: I enjoyed reading this story and I would continue reading it, even if I weren't judging it.
• I found the introduction chapter to be quite useful and interesting. It gives the readers knowledge of what is going on, which is great, in case they didn't read the description of the book. The beginning drew me in and made me want to continue to the first chapter. Overall, it is well written and well done.
• When I first started reading this story, I enjoyed it very much. I read about three chapters, then took a break. However, the author must have rewritten or changed the story during my break. I wasn't able to continue reading from where I left off, because it had all been removed and replaced. The first chapter I originally read though was intriguing, and it would fit great with what the author replaced it with. The only grammar mistake I noticed was an overuse of run-on sentences. They tended to halt the flow of the story, for me anyways. So don't be afraid to add more commas, as they will help the reader to breathe a little while reading. Other than that, I found myself wanting to continue the story. I want to learn more about how the main character, Aiden, is connected to Evangeline.
JUDGE: Sunburn_11
Since there is only one chapter, it's kinda hard to get a feel for the story. Right away, I could tell this story was going to unique, and it was. The author has a unique way of writing that makes ordinary things seem extraordinary. There were some grammar errors that seemed to all be easy things to fix. Overall, I enjoyed reading it!
JUDGE: Zahki-Bear
I liked this book a lot as far as mystery goes. It hides most of what makes a story predictable, and I like that. Only when comes the time to make an apex, the mystery is a little more resolved; I can sense the true uniqueness of the plot. As a word of constructive criticism, the characters and storyline need more unveiling. I can't wait to read what happens next! ~ Awesome! ~
BENIGNA (A Strangely Unfamiliar Novel) - BaabaRoyale
JUDGE: Brooklyn3433
Grammar: There were little to no errors that I found while reading. I would have gave it a 5, if not for a few simple spelling and typo mistakes.
Character Building: The main characters are easy to visualize and learn about. They each have their own personalities that show clearly, and they're all very well thought out and explained.
Writing Style: The authors writing style is simply beautiful. The story is easy to follow and has a nice, steady pace.
Plot Uniqueness: The plot and storyline itself is unique, yet verging on cliché. However, the author has added details that separate it from your normal 'sad and hopeless girl' cliché. Well done.
Overall Enjoyment: I've only scratched the surface of this long, strangely unfamiliar novel, but I am captivated already. I enjoyed this book very much, and I recommend it to anyone looking for a well written page turner. I will definitely continue reading this story.
• This book really stood out to me, compared to other books in the mystery/thriller genre. Right from the beginning of the Prologue, I could tell that a mystery was in the midst. As I read more, I could feel the mystery getting stronger. The start was so compelling, and the words were so captivating, that I was drawn into the story before I even reached the first chapter; which was just as thrilling as the rest that I've read so far. This is a beautifully written story and I'm excited to read more of it. I will definitely continue reading this book.
