Beginning of an end

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Mak's pov:

The morning broke out on the planet of coruscant as the clones started to awake in the barracks. An officer walked into the room shouting out "private Mak?" A young males voice is heard across the room"At your command officer!" The officer looks at his data pad with confusion "Am I in the righ....." the young solidier calls out "Yes! Yes you are. Im a volunteer." The officer smiles "ahhh i see." The officer returns to his harsh look "allright pack your things trooper" "yes sir!" Mak starts packing his things into the small leather bag of his  as the officer yells out "allright theres meant to be another one!Mur?" Another voice comes out of the room "at your command sir!" A clone appears at the end of the room. The officer quickly says "allright you do the same!" "Yes sir!" The clone trooper replied nervously.
As soon as the troopers pack their things they put on their armor almost instantaneously and both hold their helmets in their hands , "allright boys follow me we need to get to the hangar." The officer ordered, the clone and the volunteer followed the officer through the hallways of the barracks. Mak looked to his right to see Mur shaking nervously.
Thoughts:
Whats wrong with Mur? He was always the relaxed one. "Whats wrong Mur? You look like you've just seen a ghost." Mur got closer to me as he didnt want others to hear "Mak... We are about to join the stormcaller squad!" Mak replies "dont tell me we have to go through another training or ...test!" Mur whispers " No we're done proving ourselves, now we've just gotta stay alive!" Mak replied with a surprised voice until he was cut off by the officer "Aliv.....?" "Allright boys thats your transport good luck" he said whilst pointing towards the LAAT gunship. "I've got a bad feeling about this." Mur said looking at the gunship. The two walk towards the gunship.

thanks for reading the first part and i know it was a bit short but it just felt right to end it at this point.
Tell me in the comments if you enjoyed. Also i would love some constructive criticism if possible.

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