The Edge

Woke

Pari's pov:
Regaining my consciousness I opened my eyes slowly, being blinded by the bright light above me I raised my hand slightly covering my eyes. This doesn't feel right, I cannot sense Nala's presence. Slowly getting used to the bright lights I look around the room for anyone, gor an explanation. Why am I here? I wondered as a medical officer entered insisting for me to lay back down as I sat up. "Please, general you are not fit to wonder around yet." I lay back down as I mutter "Where is she?"

The officer grabs the attention of a clone as he orders him "Tell General Kenobi that general Pari is awake." The clone walks off as he nods and the officer turns to me "General, you have been unconcious for a couple of days due to your injuries but you are quite lucky, you've healed pretty quick which is most likely why you've awoken so quick. But... some of your men werent so lucky. My eyes widen in fear for my troops as I ask in pain and lay inert. "W-who?" The officer looks down at his pad and reads out their names. "Ter, died on the spot. Grizle, bled out on the way here. Commander Knigh, died here due to his wounds." I take my eyes off him as my face turns to a sorrow look.

I look towards the entrance as Master Kenobi stands in the doorway. "Master Nala! I see you have awoken from your coma." He says as he walks towards me with his arms crossed. "Where is Nala?" I say as my voice trembles a little. Master Kenobi sits next to me as he anwsers "She has successfully hunted down the ship that attacked you and is currently coming back here." "By her self?" I ask shocked. Master Kenobi smiles "All by herself, you should be proud. She has come a long way." "I am, she is learning quickly. And who were the two clones?" The master strokes his beard as he responds "Im not sure, you'll find out soon. But it is an immutable fact that you will need a new cruiser and Im glad to inform you that it is here." I nod thanking the master. "When will Nala be back?" "It must be soon seeming as she contacted me a couple of hours ago."
Master Kenobi stands to his feet as heads for the exit. "I have to leave now master Pari, I will be back to inform you about your padawan and of course tell you when you are ready to leave." He says as he leaves the room and I feel his presence fade and I lay back somewhat comfortable on my bed.

So yeah this one was a bit short and o had no clue what the title could be but hey ho.

So please give me your true and honest opinions on this question and dont be nice👉, so what do you guys HONESTLY think about the story and everything? Anything need changing or altering? If yes tell me plz in pvt messages or wherever...

Stay alive frens! |-/

Songs i was listening to:
-Truce
-ode to sleep
-migrain
-coconut sharks in the water
-forest
-trees