The Edge

Impacts of war

Mak's pov:
A number of hard coughs escaped my throat as I awoke. I could hear chatting, I needed to get some help. I was in severe pain I could feel cuts all around my body, my armor devoured by the explosion and shreds of metal pierced through my bodysuit. I could see the morning sun shine through the openings between the pieces of metal. After somewhat of a short rest I regained just enough energy to push the metal of me. I place my hands on a sheet of metal above me that seems to be holding up most of the junk and try to push off my chest with all of my strength, as I push the metal off me some small bits fall hitting my armor and the metal around me making a loud clash. "Did you hear that?" I hear as I slowly begin to rise. I walk through the metal scrap as my legs begin to stagger under me and before I know It Im on my knees with two clones holding me up. "Somebody get a hover-stretcher!" One of the clones next to me yelled. Everything went dark once again and I woke up as they were putting me onto the hover-stretcher. I look through my cracked visor to see a plate sized hole in my chestplate. I suddenly start panicking and shaking nervously, "Wha- where are they? Where am I?" I scream out. A clone standing beside me looks at me caringly "Whoa, calm down bud. We're gettin you to General Kenobi's cruiser where your friends are, ok?" The clone says as he put a needle into my arm. Everything slowly fades to complete darkness as I loose my consciousness.

*Ssssshort skip in time*

"Will they be allright?" Echoes through my head as I awake for a second and loose my consciousness once more.

Nala's pov:
As I stand next to the medical officer he looks back at me and anwsers in a concerned tone "Erm we cannot be sure commander. The three of them are in a deep coma. Only time will tell." "I understand. May I have some- time alone officer?" The clone turns to me and nods "yes sir." He says as he leaves the room. I sit next to Master Pari's bed as I think of how I could help her,Mur and Mak as they clearly are not well and I will not let the stormcaller squad loose anymore good soldiers today. Unexpectedly Master Kenobi enters "Hello Nala, I believe we havent met yet?" "No we have not Master Kenobi, but I have heard a great deal of things about you." "I've heard many things about you too young one." Master kenobi says to my surprise "I have heard that you've mastered form 4, Ataru. Its most surprising for a padawan to have mastered such a difficult way of combat." "Yes it took many years to master." "Even that surprises me, for other jedi it takes tens of years to master." "Well I guess I've just got a gift." I say with a smile. Master Kenobi smiles back "Yes a gift.... May I ask how you did not get damaged at all throughout the bombing?" I turn to master Pari as I say "Master Pari force pushed me away as the bombers swooped in. I would've helped them but the push was so powerful that I could not land on my feet and hit the back of my head on the ground." "I see so master Pari saved you from potential death." "Yes she did." Master Kenobi snaps out of his smile and turns it into a frown.
"Well I've come to tell you that Commander Knigh has just passed away." I look down at the ground counting the dead in my head. "Thats three then."Master Kenobi looks at me "Who were the other two?" "Ter and Griz, they were all good solidiers." Master Kenobi places his hand on my shoulder before he leaves "Im sure they were, well I have to get going now. Find me if you need anything. Oh and just incase you were wondering we're heading to coruscant."

Heeyy. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed! I know this chapter wasnt very action packed or anything like that but I kind of needed to put it in so yeaah. Would love some constructive criticism!

Stay alive frens! |-/