She was mystery wrapped in beauty, with a hint of chaos in her smile. she had many things to hide, and no one to unravel those secrets.
He was talent wrapped in laughter, with a hint of adventure in his smile. he had nothing to hide, and no one to...
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It's been a while since you've seen an update from this book, huh?!
Serendipityhas over 7K reads which I'm super happy about! I'm glad so many readers liked this Connor McDonough story.
So, here's the reason why I've published this chapter like 3 years after the story was completed:
I'm gonna edit Serendipity.
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Upon publication of the Epilogue, which essentially drew a close to Leilani and Connor's story, I've been back and re-read the story a few times. Honestly, comparing this story from 2015 to things I'm working on now in 2018, I cringe when I see how many mistakes I made writing this book.
Don't get me wrong, it's by far one of my favorite stories. Leilani is a lot like me: her strict grandfather, her Zio Carlo, her best friend and niece--Alexis and Megan, her big Italian family, and her cousins Haylee and Lindsey. Though most of the names of her family and friends have been changed for personal reasons.
All in all, Leilani is based off of me.
She's more like me than any other OC I've created thus far.
That's why I've decided to edit the story. It needs work and I'm not afraid to admit it. As time goes by and as I write more and more, my writing gets better and detailing gets stronger.
And I know a lot of the chapter images have disappeared, so, I will be adding gifs instead. I will also be changing the face claim for Leilani, since there was no true face claim; just "Random Tumblr Girl".
Normally, I would unpublish the story so that I can save changes without publishing the part, but I'm not sure I will do that for this story.
Editing is still awhile away. Hopefully, I'll be able to find time to do edits without having to unpublish Serendipity.
There will be other things that change in the story aside from spelling and grammatical errors. Not sure what those changes will be, but there will definitely be some.
And since it's become a popular thing on Wattpad, I might add Social Media posts such as the twitter posts from their trip to Universal and maybe I'll add in some Instagram posts as well. We shall see about that.
If you're still here for this story, please give this chapter a Vote and comment your thoughts about adding Social Media styling to some chapters! I would love to have feedback from everyone about Serendipity!
Thanks so much everyone!
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