Warrior cats OC Rater (FINISHED)

Piperwing

Name: Piperwing
Ohh! I have never seen anyone use the prefix Piper! That's interesting, I do believe that you mean the bird kind, wing is used quite a lot for bird prefixes though, (9.5/10)
Gender and Sexuality: Female, Straight
Cewl
Clan (Can be made up): ShadowClan
Nice
Role: Medicine Cat
Okay
Appearance: Piperwing is a light gray she-cat with brown toes and black tipped ears.
Her name suits her appearance, what's her eye colour? Any other details? (8/10)
Attitude/Reputation:(Uhhhh I don't exactly know how to explain this since she's a new character in the saga of Ruined)
I can understand, so you haven't given her a proper personality yet since she's a new oc, I won't score this.
Family (Including mate and kits): lots of great grandparents lets say.
Father: Whisperstar
Mother: Petalfur
Sibling: Dogtalon
Mate: Thrushflight
Kits: Lionkit, Flowerkit, and Nettlekit
Maybe give them some descriptions so we can look at the genetics, the prefix dog has never been used or confirmed but there was a Houndstar so Dog is probably one too, though Dogtalon doesn't exactly make sense but I guess Ivypool doesn't either. Great prefixes for the names though. (7/10)
Backstory: After the events of the great battle, following the second death of Whisperstars father Brokenstar that once had taken over the lake and tortured cats to death. Aspenstar dies and gives his niece leadership, Whisperstar becomes mates with a dandy and delicate she-cat named Petalfur. They have kits, named Piperkit and Dogkit. Piperkit is sickly while Dogkit is stronger than his sister, though for a harsh nature he takes care of his younger sibling. After moons of coughing it is decided that Piperkit may not live, though is allowed the chance to become an apprentice. She is too weak to fight or hunt so she becomes a medicine cat apprentice, she proved a gift as she lived for twelve great moons and became a full medicine cat of ShadowClan taking on the name Piperwing. She then falls in love with a charming BloodClan cat named Thrushflight, she has his kittens and takes them to meet him shortly after birth. Thrushflight is disgusted and slaughters them, leaving Piperwing to grieve. Moons after she has never forgiven him, even in the time where Darktail rises to power and the clans unite in the island. Thrushflight is seen in the medicine den as an injured cat, when the others were gone she fed him deathberries and watched as he died. After Darktail was defeated the cold that wrecked her as a kit came back for her, and she died. She didn't feel a bit of remorse for her lover when she killed him and ended up in the darkforest. Where a new era of evil will rise.
Great backstory! Though I have a question, did BloodClan follow the clans to their new home? Other than that, I love the ups and downs in her story but maybe you should add more bad things that she had done since her sins were basically the same as Yellowfang's who went to StarClan. (8.5/10)

And the final score iiisss....

35/40 (87.5%)
Piperwing is a great oc on its way to become fully developed, she clearly needs some more developing but already has a great base for it to grow. Thank you @Rubellise for the amazing entry.