Name: Tuck
Quite an average name but somehow I've never seen anything use it, so it's quite unique but still normal and cool (9/10)
Gender/Sexuality: She-Cat, Straight
Coolio
Clan: Clan of Winding Caves
I like that it's sort of a mix between a clan and a tribe, I've never heard anything like it (10/10)
Appearance: Large (as in chubby, she is naturally hefty) orange tabby she-cat with white paws and a short tail. Her eyes are a dirty amber colour.
I really like this appearance, it's simple but unique, most female OCs are slender and small but not yours, though, maybe you could add a few things that stand out about her like scars or marks. (9.5/10)
Attitude/Reputation: Tuck is more of the strong and silent type of cat. She definitely is no pushover, though. Being one of her clan's few Watcher-Warriors, a type of warrior who, on top of her warrior duties has the job of watching over the camp and seeing to their general well-being, and which exclusive to her clan since her clan is much smaller than average, she can't afford to be shoved around easily.
I like this as well as the unique clan roles, but I suggest you add some more personality, especially positive ones (8.5/10)
Family:Mate: None,
(Eventual, adopted) Kits: Aster (Later Astershine) and Cori,
Sibling: Her only known sibling is Chance, who was taken by her twolegs. Parents: She never got to learn their names.
This is quite simple and nice but any chance you could add their looks? (8/10)
Backstory: Tuck was born a kitty pet, and was taken from her parents before she could even learn their names, soon sent to a different home with her sibling Chance. Later on in life, she was roaming around her housefolk town, coming close to her home, when she heard the sound of a monster growling. She raced to see where it was coming from and saw the familiar look of her housefolk's monster pulling away from the home, with her brother inside. She waited and waited, but her housefolk never came back. Eventually, she wandered away and tried to find food for herself, with little results. A half-moon later, noticeably thinner than before, and in horrible shape, she collapsed and crawled under a bush in the Clan of Winding Caves's territory. A patrol soon found her and took her back, though hesitantly. Once she came back to full health she was meant to be set out again, but she begged to stay, and the leader Amberstar, sympathetic as he was, let her. It's going to take a long time, but soon, she knows, she'll be able to get her clanmates' trust.
This is a pretty nice backstory, the backstory is quite close to most kittypets though, maybe you could add some more drama. (9/10)
Others: Doesn't quite believe in the Clan of Brilliant Stars/StarClan, but she does believe there is a heaven.
That's cool :)And the final score iiiissssss
54/60!!!! (90% I'm not exactly sure but this is what i got)
All in all, this character is simple and neat with unique bits, she just needs some more spicing up but still a good character:)
Thank you @MikeTheFandomTrash for the amazing entry :)
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