Warrior cats OC Rater (FINISHED)

Swiftbird

Name: Swiftbird (Was given the name Swift from her swift and fast movements and Bird from favourite prey she often hunted)
Ooh! I've seen the name Swiftbird  around a bit but I've always loved the combination and I love that you added the reason for her name! (9/10)
Gender and Sexuality: Shows signs of Bisexual.
Oh okay, I guess she's a female.
Clan: RiverClan
Nice, one of the actual clans, can't judge that.
Appearance: Swiftbird is a slim, sleek, short-haired black and white she-cat with white patches and markings on her pelt, white on her big paws and thorn sharp claws (gifted from her mother) and large green eyes, and a long thin tail with a white tail tip.
That's a pretty cool description, I like the sharp claws, maybe add some interesting markings to her. (9/10)
Attitude/Reputation: She is often quiet but around her friends she is open and sassy, as for her reputation; well at first she was noted untrustworthy (will explain in backstory) but proved herself to be a trustworthy warrior of RiverClan.
The personality of being shy but outgoing when you know a character is actually very common and overused, untrustworthy is not common but not uncommon either, but maybe you could add something else, more interesting. (6/10)
Kin/Family/(Including Mate and kits):

Mother: Tornpelt (white battlescared long-haired she-cat with green eyes)

Father: Blackheart (A slim black tom with big green eyes)

Siblings: Whitepaw (A slim white tom with green eyes)

Mate : AshNight (Gray black tom with large yellow eyes)

Kit: Littleheart (A thin large black and white tom with large yellow eyes, /Looks similar to Swiftbird just without white patches/ )

That's a pretty cool family, the genetics seem very possible so kudos to you on that. Though, Blackheart and Littleheart seems like a strange name doesn't it? It seems kinda cruel. Ashnight doesnt exactly roll off the tongue that easily either. (8/10)

Backstory: Blackheart and Tornpelt were both exiled from their clans, they came together and had Swiftkit and Whitekit, Tornpelt admitted that she used Blackheart to have her offsprings get revenge on ThunderClan (Tornpelts original clan) so Blackheart took her and Whitekit to RiverClan, they accepted her and Whitekit but not Blackheart so he drifted away from them. Life was harder and harder for the two kits, and soon Whitekit died of greencough. She was soon trusted when she became a warrior and everything was great!
I have a few questions, how did using Blackheart get revenge on ThunderClan and why were they exiled? Anyways, I guess that she's a background character since her backstory isn't the most adventure filled, even though she is a background character, maybe add some more to it. (5.5/10)
Other Facts: Swiftpaw had a small crush on Branchpaw /BranchStar/ /Her best friend/ but this crush drifted away throughout the moons. She has anxiety whenever some cat gets greencough. Book (If you have 1): First mention 'Fun facts /spoilers/ by: First appearance will be in the third book when it comes by
Cool

Also she became friends with Branchpaw an apprentice of Thunderclan. I couldn't add that because I ran out of words to write-

She is also a She-cat please add that in /Gender and Sexuality/

And the final score iiiiiiissssss

37.5/50 (75%)
All in all, Swiftbird seems like a fine and pretty cool background character, some bits do need some working on though, thank you (random person who deleted their comment or I can't find and now I can't find their username :")) for this fabulous request