Warrior cats OC Rater (FINISHED)

Brambleglint

Name: Brambleglint
I love this name! The prefix Bramble is hardly ever used and Glint is creative and I have never seen it used before. (10/10)
Gender: She-Cat
Noice
Clan: Moon Clan
Moon is used very often for clan names, it's quite regularly used. (6/10)
Description: Brambleglint has a mystifying, almost dead yellow eyes that always seem to have a knowing glint even though she is blind. She has an orange pelt with almost maroon paws. Her tail has white stripes across and she always has sharp canines and claws. She also has a permanent burn on her back roughly the size of an A4 piece of paper.
Great description! Many blind cats are given blue and beautiful eyes but I love the dull yellow eyes, her pelt is unique, the white stripes seem strange and not very possible. I love the large burn mark and let me just say that I imagined her with a literal rectangle mark on her back XD. (8/10)
Rank: strategist
Sounds interesting!
Sexuality: Straight
Cool
Backstory: When Brambleglint was a young kit she used to be a kitty-pet until when day her human's home was burnt. Her mother, formerly called Clover now Beewing, fled to the forest with Brambleglint, formerly Lagoon, in hopes of a Clan cat pitying her and taking her in. In the process of escaping Brambleglint suffered a 3rd degree burn on her back when she tripped over a tree root. When they finally reached Moon Clan, the closest clan to the border, the leader of Moon Clan, Sparrowstar, took pity on the unfortunate pair and allowed them to stay on a condition they help strengthen the clan. When Brambleglint was an apprentice she suffered a longterm battle with green cough though she won her eyesight was slowly taken away from her. From that day she quit being a battle apprentice and became a strategist apprentice after seeing how absurd her dream was. Even though her strategist dream also seem far fetched the other clan members encouraged her through every step of the way.
I like her story! What was the dream about and how did she lose her eyesight from greencough? Her story is unique but not too crazy, it's pretty cool, is there anything else? Maybe add some details. (8/10)
Personality: Brambleglint though a wise cat will not tolerate any misbehaviour often resorting to harsh punishment for those who retaliate. She also hates kits and will often run away at the sight of a single kit. She is also prideful and arrogant and will often continue thinking that she was right when it is proven that she was wrong.
I like her personality! It's something you don't usually see (aye that was quite punny), why doesn't she like kits? Maybe add some more good traits, so far there's only one good trait and a few million negative ones. (8.5/10)
Parents:
Clover/Beewing: She has a orange coat with dazzling emerald eyes and has a minor burn on the tip of her tail. (Mother)
Navy: A orange cat with yellow eyes
I guess that Navy is her father, Navy doesn't exactly suit an orange cat though and does one of them have any white markings like Brambleglint? Or maybe one of their relatives do. I like it, it's nice and simple. (7.5/10)
Special Skill: a very accurate premonition.
Cool!

And the final score iiiss
48/60 (80%)
All in all Brambleglint is an amazing oc, she needs just a few details added. Thank you @SarcasticCanis for the fabulous entry!