Name: Creekpaw
Creek is a prefix that isn't used often nor is it used not often, it's simple but maybe you could put what his warrior name is going to be. (7.5/10)
Gender: tom
Nice
Sexuality: straight
Cewl
Clan: Formerly RiverClan, now WindClan
Okay, don't see that everyday.
Appearance: dark grey with pale greens eyes
That is a very simple appearance, it is used a lot, his appearance seems quite bland, add some markings, scars or something special about them. (6/10)
Attitude: untrusting, jumpy, anxious, determined
Jumpy is used quite a lot in OCs, maybe you could add some more positive traits. (5.5/10)
Family: died in the flood that forced him to move to WindClan, and little is known about them.
Then I won't rate it.
Backstory: RiverClan flooded, and he managed to grab hold of a branch, which ended up saving his life. Because he survived, his mind has been permanently stained with the memory of the choked yowls from cats, and their dead bodies.
Okay. Can you explain how he was forced to moved to WindClan just because of a flood? RiverClan must've gotten better after a flood, how did WindClan accept him so easily? I like the bits you already have tho. (5/10)
Facts: no facts, because he isn't fully developed Book is in the making
Okay, maybe develop everything before you write a book.
And the final score iiiisss
24/40 (60%)
I couldn't get a proper overview of him since he is hardly even developed yet, Creekpaw might need some tweaks and filling ins before develop him even more. Thank you @SoftFiction for this glamorous entry.
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