Author: lionobsession
Title: Unite: The Broken Worlds Trilogy
Genre: high fantasy
Mature: I'd say PG 14 for non-graphic suicide and mental illness that might be upsetting to some readers.
Cover and Title: 3/5
Both the cover and the title are very pretty and appropriate. However, neither is very unique. I don't know how many wattpad novels are titled Unite. The cover is simple and elegant, but it's not particularly eye catching.
Blurb: 4/5
The blurb is very good. It gives just the right amount away. There was just something about it that seemed slightly off-kilter. I couldn't quite put my finger on what. I'd also try not to drop so many names within the blurb.
First Impressions: 4/5
Excellent. My only slightly negative is that I don't like it when chapters are split up, but I know many readers prefer it. That's just a me thing.
Characters: 3.75/5
It wasn't easy for me to get a feel on the characters for a long time. Once I did, they were wonderful, but I want to be invested in them sooner.
Grammar: 5/5
I didn't see a single error.
Plot: 4/5
Your world building was absolutely incredible. I am both amazed and intimidated by your extensive knowledge of the universe you created. I mean, you created your own languages! How incredible is that?
The plot itself was very good, although I've seen plenty of stories, published and not published with divided fae worlds.
Overall: 3.95/5 or 23.75/30
A solid score for an excellent novel, perfect for any lover of intense fantasy.
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