Author: Samantha_Leann
Title: Dominica
Genre: Werewolf
Mature: Yes, but not bad. Readers needn't worry unless their really sensitive.
Cover and Title: 3/5
The cover was cool. I liked the green eyes. It could be a bit more unique to compete with all the others out there. The title was fine, but maybe use something other than just the name of the main character.
Blurb: 2/5
It was okay, but short. I'd add more detail.
First Impressions: 2/5
Your prologue should have been broken into an Author's note, but I don't think all the early information is necessary. People would skim it and if it's important it should be explained within the actual story.
The waking up in the morning thing is a bit cliché, and multiple chapters start like that. You also changed tenses early on which marred my first impression.
Characters: 4/5
You had lots of unique characters. Well done! They were all different and had such interesting names. I've never heard Cavarn as a name (might have spelled that wrong) but it's very cool!
Grammar: 3/5
There was some typos but nothing that major. Just give each chapter a careful read through and you'll catch it all.
Plot: 3/5
At this point, I think any werewolf story will be a bit cliché just because there's so many. I have to give extra stars just for making a male lead that isn't overly possessive and dominating. I loved Sebastian.
Overall: 2.8/5
I can recommend this to any fan of the werewolf genre!
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