A storm over head (Daryl Dixon fanfic)

"walker got Jim".

....." to save her", Daryl was worried she was the only one that had been nice to her.  of course he didn't care  that much about her why would he do that . but to admit that he was worried that was a fact , Lori came and washed her down and checked if there any bites . she was unconscious , but breathing everybody was out side but Lori . she was making sure her friend was going to make it . The camp had lost so many people the night before ,  so they were dealing with them .  stabbing them in the head , burning the ones that weren't  their people , and the ones that were they were putting them in a grave .  Tamara could of easily been one of those . luckily she didn't cut deep enough , she was weak from the lack of food and the blood lose. where was the camp going to go now that was save . 

the van began to move and Tamara begin to stir . she sat up where she was sitting  and saw Jim throwing up ,she got up slowly  and helped him to his side, he nodded a thank you in response . she tried to talk to ask what happened but no sound came out , she touched her neck and felt fabric  she walked to the mirror that was in the van and saw a stained read checked piece of fabric tied around her neck  . she was glad that she didn't die ,  but now she was in extricating pain  she walked to the drivers seat where Jaqui and dale were sitting . taping Jaqui on the shoulder she pointed to the back, Jaqui understood and went to the back of the van . Jim  and her spoke for a bit and then she came back to the front . " he wants to stop"

" why " dale said .

" he says it getting worse and he just wants it to all stop "

dale nodded and honked the horn twice the all pulled over Jaqui ,dale and Tamara got out of the van .  Carl came running at Tamara and engulfed her in a hug so did Lori .  Daryl smiled at her and she nodded in response . Jim was let out of the van and propped up against a tree . Tamara was the first to go up , even though she didn't know him to well it was the respect that mattered right . she handed him her police gun since she never used it , "thank you for understanding" Jim replied . Tamara tried to replay but still couldn't talk . instead she waved and walked down the hill , instead of going back into the van which was no longer as cramped  she went to Daryl blue truck . sitting in the front seat , waiting for Daryl to return.  now Tamara new that a walker got Jim , and now Jim was a dead man .

author not: for this chapter i left out the part where the found out that Jim was bitten just because i felt that it wasn't need.   three chapters today .

what do you all think about Tamara riding with Daryl ?

and 

will she be able to talk again?