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Dear Readers, 

        Alot of the time I start writting and end up deleting alot some parts because I end up having even better ideas that I like. In the last chapter I started to do the same. Instead I decided to show what the first draft orginally was. There are 2 cut versions of this chapter, but I decided to use to the other later on. Blow is: Cut Version 2 

~Enjoy 


“I’ll be right back.” Both of them looked at me curiously, questioning what I was doing. I walked right up to where Sophia was. “Hey Soph.” Everyone  at the table looked at me.

 

“You look cheery, thought you were gonna fall over dead in science class.” I watched as her green eyes sparkled in the sunlight. I looked inside her thoughts, she had been watching me. I couldn’t help but smile.

 

“Damn you're gonna blind someone with those braces.” Rachel said to me. Everyone at the table laughed beside the Sophia and a few others. “Don’t think you're hot shit now because you stood up to Stone and Dunbar.”  

 

“.....any way.” I looked at Sophia. “I came over and asked if you wanna eat lunch with me and my friends.”

 

“No she doesn’t want eat lunch with you and your freaky hair.” Rachel said to me. I could see she wasn’t going to shut up. Sometimes I couldn’t tell if she really didn’t like me or just picked with me to fit in.

 

“Sure I’ll sit with you.” Sophia got up with her tray and went to our table. I followed behind us.

 

“I hope you guys don’t mind.” I said looking at them.

 

“Seriously, the pretty prince is sitting with us.” Jazz said looked like I just burned her alive.


“Jasmine.” Jazz’s eyes locked with mine. “If you’re gonna be that way, then you're no better than Rachel and the way she treats me. In fact you can sit with her with her if you want too.”

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