Hello, Everyone!
Good Day. I am writing this note to give an appreciation to Lavender's Award, specially to the judges whom gave their honest point of perspective as they read this story. Here are some quite of points that I have to addressed in their feedback.
- The plot of this story is not new but the twist isn't. There are interesting things to read in this story but haven't uploaded it yet because it is under revision.
- I didn't put any flashback warning on the second chapter because it is the real simula in the story. On where the story truly started. POV po iyon ni Zenthon at ang third chapter ay POV ni Amariah.
- The Gangster Series is composed of three series;
Beats of Dusk
Pulse of Dawn
Gleam of Twilight
All first chapter are the present times of the characters. The next chapter will depends on how story flows, it might be the POV of the male lead or the female lead. I didn't put any warnings anymore if it is a flashback (not unless kung Warnings) dahil una palang po malalaman mo na kung flashback o hindi since sunod-sunod naman po ang story after the very first chapter. This is how my writing style that some readers doesn't know yet, I know it will made the readers confused and that's the reason why I made it that way dahil hindi mo talaga malalaman ang totoong nilalaman kung hindi mo susubukang basahin at intindihin ang susunod na pahina. I am trying to confused the readers sa una, giving them hints through the POVs of my lead characters dahil gusto kong pasukin ang isipan nila ng mga katanungan, gusto kong mas palawakin pa ang kanilang imahinasyon sa aking istorya, gusto kong mas bigyan sila ng interesanteng katanungan at palaisipin kaya ibinibigay ko ito ng pahapyaw. I am just writing my story but the readers are the one who truly gave life to my characters based on their understanding and imaginations.
Thank you so much for the honest feedback. I really appreciate it. It will help me improve for sure and giving me knowledge and hints to give a note to my readers for this story. Thank you so much for the scores! <3 Goodbless <3
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Hello. I'd like to promote my new completed story Trapped. It is one of the story from Sipalay Series.
Sipalay Series, is composed of 3 stories;
Trapped
Tamed
Tripped
Genre: Romance
Trapped is already uploaded here on my Wattpad Account. Ito din po ay soon to be self-published book. Mag bibigay po kami ng dalawang libro as a give-away once for release na, so please stay tuned for the further announcement and if you have an ample of time. Please support Sipalay Series.
I'd also like to ask for support sa Trapped dahil kasama po ito as Entry sa Wattys2023. Please do vote my story for Wattys2023 and read it. I'll assure you, it will bring you to the world that you'll love to be.
Thank you so much and happy readings!
BINABASA MO ANG
Beats of Dusk (Gangster Series #1)
General FictionAmariah Kiela Sue -Laurier has everything, wealth, power, beauty, but despite of those, people didn't know that she has a very tragic life, she was been kidnapped with her older cousin. She was traumatized and suffered both emotionally and mentally...