So before we get into this, I want to explain a few things
I'll be putting the script under each page. None of them have dialogue in the panels, so you'll just have to make do with that. Sorry!
I also want to make it known that Don is a brat, so you're allowed to find him annoying. It's like the whole point. Him being a brat is what pushes the plot to where it goes. I feel bad for his mom lol and a bit embarrassed for Richard too
You'll also be able to see how I wrote the script for the comic too. Kinda messy, but that's ok
Also, it reads from left to right
Anyways, enjoy!
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CAST: Donathan Richard Victoria (Don's mom) Douglass (Richard's dad) Ferris (Don's dog)
[shot: FRONT YARD. Looking at angle of house] Narration: I can't begin to tell you the story about what has to be the strangest week of my life I ever had. Still, I have to share this tale somehow. I just don't know where to start. Maybe at the start. That's probably a good idea
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*Scene: FRONT YARD* [Wide shot. panel facing road, Don and Richard in foreground playing under the sprinkler with dog named Ferris. Victoria and Douglass in background by Douglass' car]
Don: So you're staying here for the week? Richard: Yeah D: Why? R: Don't know. My mom and dad don't tell me anything. They want to keep me out of it, I think, so they threw me at you guys D: that's a bit weird R: I know (BACKGROUND convo: Douglass: thanks for keeping him. It's getting messy at home and we don't want to upset him. Victoria: it's no problem, Douglass. Don could use the company. I think he's starting to get bored with me Douglass: You're just saying that. You're a good parent. Better than me V: Aw...)
[Wide shot. V and Dou in foreground, backs turned to audience with D and R in background, looking towards the parents] V: Don! Richard! Get out of the sprinklers! Richard, come say goodbye to your dad! R: No thanks