[TATTLETAIL COMIC] Chapter One: Child's Play

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So before we get into this, I want to explain a few things

I'll be putting the script under each page. None of them have dialogue in the panels, so you'll just have to make do with that. Sorry!

I also want to make it known that Don is a brat, so you're allowed to find him annoying. It's like the whole point. Him being a brat is what pushes the plot to where it goes. I feel bad for his mom lol and a bit embarrassed for Richard too

You'll also be able to see how I wrote the script for the comic too. Kinda messy, but that's ok

Also, it reads from left to right

Anyways, enjoy!

CAST:DonathanRichardVictoria (Don's mom)Douglass (Richard's dad)Ferris (Don's dog)

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CAST:
Donathan
Richard
Victoria (Don's mom)
Douglass (Richard's dad)
Ferris (Don's dog)

[shot: FRONT YARD. Looking at angle of house]
Narration: I can't begin to tell you the story about what has to be the strangest week of my life I ever had. Still, I have to share this tale somehow. I just don't know where to start. Maybe at the start. That's probably a good idea

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*Scene: FRONT YARD*[Wide shot

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*Scene: FRONT YARD*
[Wide shot. panel facing road, Don and Richard in foreground playing under the sprinkler with dog named Ferris. Victoria and Douglass in background by Douglass' car]

Don: So you're staying here for the week?
Richard: Yeah
D: Why?
R: Don't know. My mom and dad don't tell me anything. They want to keep me out of it, I think, so they threw me at you guys
D: that's a bit weird
R: I know
(BACKGROUND convo:
Douglass: thanks for keeping him. It's getting messy at home and we don't want to upset him.
Victoria: it's no problem, Douglass. Don could use the company. I think he's starting to get bored with me
Douglass: You're just saying that. You're a good parent. Better than me
V: Aw...)

[Wide shot. V and Dou in foreground, backs turned to audience with D and R in background, looking towards the parents]
V: Don! Richard! Get out of the sprinklers! Richard, come say goodbye to your dad!
R: No thanks

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