The Future of the Dres&Don Show

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Think I may revamp and rewrite some of it

I'm still keeping most of it, but majority of the episodes are just all over the place and, while I do think I'm doing a good job of making each episode better than the last, the writing isn't completely consistent and idk if you noticed, but Dick and Don constantly cycle between one being the last functioning brain cell and the other having the brain capacity of a paper towel. I want to make their characters consistent as I can

And idk about you but I hated the Hobby Hunting episode.

Sooooooooo
I'm gonna rethink some things and rewrite it

Imma make an actual book cover and redo the episode thumbnails when I get to them

Uhhhhhh

Hmmmmmm

Not sure what'll replace the episodes I've written
I'm definitely going to redo the first episode since it was literally just an introduction and not much conflict happened hmmmmmm

I actually need you guys to answer a few questions

Should I make this show apart of its own universe or stick with the original idea that they are waking up after dying in THQ and living this reality?

If I do make it part of its own universe, should I keep their normal clothes or have them (mainly Don I guess) wear more modern clothes?

I think that's all the questions

Also there was never an overARCHING conflict, it was just "gotta get the bread or else we gonna be dead lol"
Also also, last year was when I realized that people say "let's get this bread" because bread is made of dough and dough can also mean cash or money
:)

Ok, back on track

So I need to asses actual conflicts in the episodes that reach actual conclusions in the end, add a bit more magic stuff to it since they just live in that sort of world, create an overarching conflict for the seasons (still just gonna have two), and maybe practice a bit more world building and character development.........
Idk give me a break man

What do you guys think of my idea?

I know this update post thing was a little all over the place, but ehhhhh I really wanna try something with this

I also may not make it so hard to write each episode. Like, I really like the imagery I write in it and it really paints the scene, but it just takes so long to DO

Anyways, that's all

Please answer my questions and let me know what you think!

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