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Hey, mí bellás!
So, how was it?
Is it good? Or... kinda bad?
Or even... worst?
I wanna know your thoughts about the previous chapters,
– kung kinulang ba sa effort?
– sabaw yung bawat chapters?
– kinulang ba sa emotions?
– masyadong mababaw yung English?
– kung bitin ba yung bawat chapter?
– masyado bang maikli?
– parang 'jeje' yung mga characters?
– sobrang waley ba?
– kung nakakabagot ba?
– masyado bang cliché?
– magulo ba yung flow?
or maybe...
– the story is a whole trash?
Do you have any?
Please... let me know.
Anyway, naguguluhan ba kayo every chapter?
When I first wrote this one, I thought of using a POV of a certain character...
But, I realized, Im not really good at it. It's better if I used a Third Person, instead of Personal Point of View.
Mas nagiging malawak kase yung perception ko, and in my view, mas nade-describe ko ng maayos yung isang scene, so yeah... maybe, I stick to this pattern.
Sana, hindi kayo maguluhan.
And Im doing my very best, for you to understand the flow of the story.
Though, it doesn't even have a proper plot.
BUT STILL.
Im grateful to those who took a peek on my story!
THANK YOU SO MUCH.
Especially, for the votes...
I highly appreciate it!
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– BELLAAMOR97
BINABASA MO ANG
Crimson Rush (On-Going)
ActionHer name is Harper Landry. She's 'mute' but with undeniable caucasian beauty. Everyone who knew her, used to mock and laugh her, because of her condition, but still, she doesn't mind at all. They can mock her for all she cares, she's used to their i...
