to start off i just wanna say that i am thinking really hard on wether or not i wanna keep this story up, i am so tempted to delete it right now
And before you ask why i havent updated, its because it hasnt been a good past weeks, my grandmother passed away and thats hit me so hard that i dont even know what to do anymore!
And the reason why i wanna delete this story is because the past few days ive been editing it like crazy because HOLY CRAP! I re read this story and i cringed so bad (and dont think im
Putting myself down, im simply giving myself constructive criticism)
I feel like the plot of this story is executed so poorly, i began writing this story when i was about 16, im almost 20 now and i can honestly say that ive gained more knowledge on literature.
The plan of this story was something i thought was genius at the time and now i see how poorly i took on this idea, i understand that not everyone is born a natural author with perfect grammar and a perfect way of putting detail in words but come on, i could've done so much better.
For example, in the first few chapters Michaela agrees to go to Austin's party simply bc she wanted answers?!?!?! Seriously what the fuck was i thinking?
Oh and lets not forget that Austin asked michaela to be his girlfriend literally the same day he acknowledged her existence!! TYPICAL FANFICTION!!
Not only that but then i always seem to forget myself that i made Austin famous in the beginning of the story but now i always forget!!
Ugh its so irritating!
I really feel like in the later chapters is when my writing skills started improving but not dramatically, dont get me wrong im so thankful for this story because it sparked my imagination in a way that i didnt think was possible.
I just dont know what to do, i know it will hurt me so much to delete this because its become a part of me now but editing is gonna put off this story more than i already have, im always so full of excuses and even im growing tired of myself!!
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TAKEN (Austin Mahone Fanfiction) UNDER MAJOR EDITING
FanficMichaela is just a sweet innocent girl who out of nowhere catches the attention of one of the biggest "jerks" in school, also known as teen pop sensation Austin Mahone. Unaware that hes had a rough past Austin seems happy and hes able to show her a...
