The Defining Moment

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INT. MERCER LIBERTY HIGH SCHOOL - AUDITORIUM - EVENING

James sits to the side of the stage. Students move props around him, as he studies his script, whispering his lines.

MR. MOUSER - Everyone! Before I leave, call time for tomorrow is six. And yes, that's six p.m for those of you wondering.

INT. JAMES' CAR (MOVING) - EVENING

James drives home and pulls into his neighborhood. RING... James answers his phone on speaker. 

JAMES - What's up? 

KEVIN (V.O) - I heard someone got a call from Richard the other day. 

James doesn't pick up on Kevin's facetious tone. 

JAMES - Yeah, he's coming to opening night. 

KEVIN (V.O) - Oh, I know. I just spoke with him. Thanks for telling me!

JAMES - I know... Sorry. 

KEVIN (V.O) - You get one call from an agent and you've already forgotten about me. 

JAMES - Okay, mister dramatic. I was gonna surprise you after class. 

KEVIN (V.O) - Speaking of, coming in early tonight. I wanna polish your accent before your big night. 

James checks his phone and ponders.

KEVIN (V.O) - Is that good, or...?

JAMES - No-no, that's perfect. I'll head there now. 

BEEP... James gets an incoming call from "Mom". 

KEVIN (V.O) - See ya soon. 

James answers. Edith sounds elated. 

EDITH (V.O) - Honey! You almost home? 

JAMES - I think I'm going right to class instead. 

EDITH (V.O) (disappointed) - Oh... Okay, sweetie. That's not a -- 

JAMES - Is that okay? I can swing by if not. 

James stops at a stop sign. He awaits Edith's answer to decide which way he's going -- home or class. 

EDITH (V.O) - No! Don't be silly. 

James turns on his blinker and pulls onto his street

EDITH (V.O) - Of course that's okay. I know you have your big show you gotta get ready for. 

JAMES - Okay. Also, don't worry about dinner. I'll grab something on the way. 

EDITH (V.O) - That's perfect. I haven't even gotten a chance to cook yet. 

Edith speaks with an overcompensating tone, clearly lying. James slows down as he approaches his house. 

JAMES - You sure? 

James inches along and looks into his home. Through a window, he finds Edith holding the phone with one hand and grabbing CHOCOLATE CAKE off the table with another. She brings the cake into the kitchen. 

EDITH (V.O) - Yes. Now go practice with Kevin, and I'll see you later. 

He looks to his house guilty, before driving off.  

JAMES - Alright, I'll see you tonight then. Love you. 

EDITH (V.O) - Love you too, bye. 

James hangs up. He stares ahead, unsure of his decision. 

KEVIN (PRE-LAP) (clapping) Yes! That's the one right there. 


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