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I started the "Hurt Me" Series two years ago when I was truly obsessed with the show and then I fell off for a while because ST was taking forever to come back. I did return a year later and write like around ten chapters but then I left again because this plot is actually atrocious. Let me list all the shit that's going on simultaneously:

- Will and Mike are splitsville
- Jonathan is a gold digger
- Karen's preggers
- Patrick SA'd Troy and is now in Hawkins
- Stan is also in Hawkins
- Will and Troy are best friends
- Isaiah is actually plotting to kill people
- Will moved out of nowhere
- Will's a cheerleader
- El got SA'd by Jennifer aka the same girl who is partly at fault for almost killing Mike
- Blaine is being abused by Jennifer
- Lucas is still having sexual identity issues
- There's a random new character that I never brought up again (Juhani)
- Max and Mike are friends again
- Isaiah is getting bullied and Blaine helps him out
- Will had DID and his alters are a Demogorgan???
- Dustin literally doesn't exist anymore
- Mike has a matchmaking business
- Steve and Troy are step bros and Steve's dating Billy???
- Isaiah has a gun dealer who has a crush on him???
- Mike has a prosthetic leg
- Henry Bowers' cousin was the first person Will came out to
- Joyce has a new boyfriend
- Lonnie is dead and no one actually cares
- Troy's mom is actually the abusive one???
- Probably a whole bunch more that I skipped over

So with that being said, in order for me to finish this book, I'm going to have to fix it. My writing style has changes somewhat drastically and/or I put more effort into my writing so expect better quality, a more tight consistent storyline (that isn't just a random sequence of events), and a chance to get to know the characters better.

I've gotta sum up/scrap some of these storylines. There's only like a few that are actually plot relevant. I'm keeping the ending the same so now I just need a lot of build up, y'all are gonna be so shocked when you see what I've planned.

The ending is to die for. Muhahahahaha!

To be continued...
[ 6/18/22 | 380 words]

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