WINNERS - Friends to lovers

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This category was judged by Cool-cat2023

🥇 1st place winner 🥇

Stay by lostlovefairy

Title and book cover- 10/10

Blurb- 10/10

Plot- 5/5

Creativity and originality- 20/20

Character development- 20/20

Story flow- 5/5

Research and attention to detail- 15/15

Grammar and punctuation- 10/10

Overall impression- 5/5

Total= 100/100

I remember reading this book and being totally impressed. The setting was so vivid, I could imagine my shadow standing there and watching everything happen. 

The inclusion of music in it at first raised my brows but as I kept on wondering, I thought, "you know, I really like this concept of music in it." 

Good job on making this an interesting read and keep up the good work!

Good job on making this an interesting read and keep up the good work!

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🥈 2nd place winner 🥈

You have no idea By _RulerOfHearts_

Title and book cover- 10/10

Blurb- 10/10

Plot- 5/5

Creativity and originality- 20/20

Character development- 20/20

Story flow- 5/5

Research and attention to detail- 15/15

Grammar and punctuation - 8/10

Overall impression- 4/5

Total= 97/100

The first comment on the first chapter said something along the lines of 'this book has some potential' and I totally agree with it, your book is an amazing book that has a unique potential to become a film that I'd love to watch. 

Yes, while I read the book, I realized I'd prefer it if it was a film rather than a book. I like how well you use words but one thing I noticed was how you used the word, "deadpanned" so often. 

Like, Anirban deadpanned or she deadpanned and I'll say it really, (forgot the word for it), but it really makes me lose some interest, an alternative is, "Anirban warned flatly or Anirban said blankly". 

Overall, good job and well done!

Overall, good job and well done!

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🥉 3rd place winner 🥉

Do you get Deja vu too? by safetaynet

Title and book cover- 5/10

Blurb- 10/10

Plot- 5/5

Creativity and originality- 20/20

Character development- 20/20

Story flow- 5/5

Research and attention to detail- 15/15

Grammar and punctuations- 10/10

Overall impression- 5/5

Total= 95/100

The book cover is something I consider plain because normally, I like to go for a more bright and colorful cover but if you feel that's the best, then that's the best.

 I like how you described it, it really made me understand a little bit of what the book would be about without spoiling too much.

 I love how you write- you just seem to write for the love of it and it shows in your book, you're not scared to show the songs you like or say things the way you see it, you just seem original and real.

 Your characters each exhibit some part of you which I say is good, because it brings them to life. Overall, good job on your book and thanks for the music, really helped me! (did you listen to Taylor Swift's new album?)

 Overall, good job on your book and thanks for the music, really helped me! (did you listen to Taylor Swift's new album?)

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