...It Needs Something

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~FOR CAUGHT UP TSTHOAT READERS ONLY~ ***SPOILERS INCLUDED IF YOU HAVE NOT READ ALL 27 CHAPTERS SO FAR***

So, I'm currently working on chapter 28 of TSTHOAT (aka the prom chapter we've all been waiting for :D) and I just feel like it...needs something. You know that feeling? I just need to add something to it to REALLY leave you guys with that 'wow' effect after you're finished reading it. My goal is to publish it today or tomorrow, but I make no promises, especially since I'm on vacation right now.

...any ideas? I'm basically asking you guys the following question:

What are some things you would like to see happen during the Prom chapter in TSTHOAT?

Important things to remember:
• Rena and Keith are going together
• Isaac and Rhythimi are going together
• Chapter 27 ended with Rena telling Ice she wanted to back out of the job

Now, comment away!

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