When I Come Back....

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When I come back, I'm re-writing The Things That Define Us. And I don't mean just fixing spelling/grammar, I'm RE-WRITING it. I think I'll try to make the plot flow better, fix factual errors, add in more fights/conflicts between the characters, give Gold more of a personality (because apparently he didn't have one in the first place), make the battle scenes suck less, re-word almost every line written throughout the entire thing, and make Tigerlily more flawed.

Phew... That's a long list.

Ok, yeah, that's it.

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