Type Of Story: 5SOS
Author: WeComeRunning
Story Rating Estimation: PG-13/maybe R
Reads: 1K
Votes: 59
Comments: 54
Description: "You can call me mommy, while we're stuck here."
"You're freaky as fuck, stella."
In which two neighborhood runaways discover something they never knew about each other ; stella's mommy kink, and michael's obsession with otp's, vaginas, wattpad, and tumblr.
Copyright 2015 @WeComeRunning
Suggested If: you like stories with humor as well as romance
My Review: I really, really like the plot. I find it pretty amusing and I have never heard of a story with "mommy kink" before, so that's an interesting change. There is one thing I noticed though–a part of the summary doesn't seem to match up with the actual plot. In the summary it mentions that they're runaways, but there was a part in the story where Michael mentions wanting to go home and lose himself in Wattpad. So unless they run away later in the plot, I'd change that. Your grammar and spelling is pretty good and I like your chapter lengths, too. Overall, I think you're definitely off to a good start–just fix that plot hole if it's necessary.
Note to Author: I'd continue! :)
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Note: #Mella, maybe? I dunno xD
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