Surprise?! (Louis Tomlinson FanFic)

Chapter 22 - A Little Twist

Chapter 22

Louis's POV

"Babe? Where are you going?" I asked Jillian. She's wearing a pink bikini with a white tank top and jean shorts.

"Oh.. The girls and I will be hanging out by the beach to get some time away from you guys."

"Ouch that hurts!" I pouted.

"Awww.... I love you!" She gave me a kiss on the lips. I grabbed her by the waist to deepened the kiss.

"Jillian what's taking you so lon-ahhhhhh!" Maureen screamed when she walked in and saw what we were doing.

"Maureen! Do you know the word knock? You know... Knock? K-N-O-C-K? Knock?" I said frustratedly.

"Sorry! The girls and I were waiting for her downstairs for about 10 minutes now. They asked me to check up on her."

"Sorry for keeping you guys waiting. I'll be down in a minute." She told Maureen to go down and wait for her there.

"Kk. Use protection guys!" Maureen shouted before she left the room. Jillian started to blush. Aww she looks so cute when she blush!

"Well, I better leave. The girls are waiting for me downstairs."

"Be careful!" I warned her.

"I will." She gave me a kiss and was out the door.

"Don't go too deep in the ocean!" I shouted.

"I won't!"She shouted back.

"Love you!"

"Love you too!"

Jillian's POV

When I got downstairs the girls were already there sitting and waiting impatiently on the sofa.

"After a million make outs later... Finally!" Natalie teased me. I blushed.

'Curse you Maureen!!!' I thought to myself.

"Awww... Natalie, it's not like you haven't made out with Niall yet?" Perrie asked her.

"To be honest.... We haven't." Natalie said looking down.

"What?!" We all said altogether.

Knowing Niall for 2 years, he can't resist not even getting to hold Natalie's hand. He's very much into PDA. He likes to show off how much he loves Natalie.

"Well... He's been... Distant lately." She said still looking down.

"Don't worry Natz, he'll come around."Danielle said.

"I'm just so scared. Like... What if he breaks up with me?"

"He won't! He loves you too much. I can see it in his eyes when he looks at you." I assured her.

"You sure?" Natalie asked looking up to us.

"A hundred percent sure." I told her.

"Thanks guys you're the bestest friends in the whole wide world!" We all shared a girl group hug.

"Now, let's go to the beach!" Natalie said.

"To the beach!"

And with that we went by the beach to have a girls day by the beach.

Niall's POV

"Well... He's been... Distant lately." I heard Natalie said.

"Don't worry Natz, he'll come around." Danielle said reassuring my lovely girlfriend.

"I'm just so scared. Like... What if he breaks up with me?" Natalie told the others.

What?! She thinks I'm gonna break up with her? No no no! Not now! Not ever! I'm never letting her go!

"What are you doing there Ni?" I jumped with the sudden voice that came from behind. It was just Liam.

"Oh Liam. You scared the sh** out of me."

"Oh sorry lad. But again, what are you doing there?"

"Remember my plan?" I asked him. He's the only one who knew about it.

"Yeah what about that?" He said nodding his head.

"Natalie noticed that I've been distant lately. You know I'm bad at keeping secrets, so I decided not to be too close to her for a while so that the secret will be safe. But now... now... She thinks I'm gonna break up with her. What do I do Li?"

"Do it ASAP. It's better to tell her earlier than her deciding to leave." He has a point.

"Ok. I'll do it earlier. But what if something goes wrong?"

"Nothing's gonna go wrong." Liam said while patting my back.

"Thanks lad. That really helped a lot."

"No prob Ni. Anytime."

I have to do it. It's now or never.

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A little twist to the story.

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