Surprise?! (Louis Tomlinson FanFic)

Chapter 1 - The Story

Author's Note : This was supposed to be an imagine but thanks to my friend Sadie aka little_ballerina_916, it got too long to become an imagine. So I turned it into a real fanfic but not a long one. So please don't expect me to update everyday.

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Chapter 1

Jillian's POV

People say I'm the luckiest girl alive. Well, I totally agree! Why you ask? It's just because I'm the youngest member of the Payne family meaning I'm the youngest sister of One Direction's Liam Payne. I'm also THE Louis Tomlinson's fiancée. Louis and I have been dating for 2 years. When we were dating, we used to go on dates with Liam at least 5 ft. away from us, sometimes even closer. {He's a really overprotective brother.} But luckily he got used to it.

The lads are leaving for their 2013 Take Me Home Asian Tour a month from now, so Louis and I spend almost every minute together. I was deep in thoughts of what life would be without my crazy lovable boyfriend and my strict but awesome brother for a good 8 months until I saw my phone light up signaling I have a message :

From : LouBear < 3

Hey babe! Pick u up @ 7 after our recording session. Wear something fancy. ;)

To : LouBear <3

Where are you taking me this tym???

From : LouBear <3

It's a surprise. ;)

To : LouBear <3

Fine! See ya later alligator! xoxo

From : LouBear <3

Can't wait! Love ya! xx

To : LouBear <3

Love ya too! xoxo

It was already 5:00pm so I only had 2 hours to get dolled up. I quickly took a shower which took 30 minutes of my time. 5:30pm, I went to my closet to pick my outfit. I chose a simple black dress that stopped on the knees. I matched it with some black stilettos. When I finished it was already 5:45pm. I blow-dried my hair and put it up into an intricate bun, and braided hair encircled around it. I embellished the bun with Swarovski crystal pins to complete the up-do. I also did my makeup in a natural style so I don't overdo it. (unlike those cake-faced sluts who look like clowns)... and DONE! I'm ready for tonight. The doorbell rang signaling Louis's arrival. 7:00 pm, right on time.

Tonight's gonna be fun!

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That wraps up Chapter 1!!! I'll try to post chapter 2 as soon as possible. :)

Hope you enjoyed it!

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