Surprise?! (Louis Tomlinson FanFic)

Chapter 23 - Louis's Bright Idea

This chapter is dedicated to my friend Natalie who believes that she has been (and still is) married to the one and only Niall Horan.

(Which is roughly 13 years)

I SHIP NIALLIE!!!!

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Chapter 23

Niall's POV

"Niall what up with the meeting at 11:30pm? You made me leave the warmth of mine and Jill's bed." Louis said sleepily.

I texted the lads to meet me at the poolside for a quick meeting.

"Yeah Niall, we're all tired from all the swimming we did today." Zayn complained.

"Lads stop complaining. This is serious business. Well... For Niall it is." Liam said.

"But why do we need to talk about it at 11:30 in the evening? Can't it wait until tomorrow?" Zayn complained yet again.

"Natalie and the girls should be asleep when we talk about this."

"Ok fine. What do you need?" Harry said rubbing his eyes.

"I'm planning on proposing to Natalie for a while now. I already have the ring but I don't know how to do it. I can't think of an extraordinary way to ask her."

"You woke us up for that? That's your prob- wait... Propose? As in.... You're gonna propose? To Natalie? Like ask her to marry you?" Louis said with his eyes wide open. He started jumping up and down.

"Yeah?" I answered with curiosity.

"What's with the jumping?" Harry asked.

"Come on guys! He's gonna propose! This IS important!" Louis said.

"Why is it important?" Zayn asked.

"Well, I've been through that situation, remember? I know how stressing it is to plan and make everything perfect for the girl you love."

"Thanks lad. At least someone can relate to me."

"Don't mention it." He said patting my back.

"Can we just go straight to the plan?" Zayn said crankily.

"That's the problem mate. I don't have a plan."

"Ugh! Whatever. Just tell me the plan when you've got one. Then I'll help. I'm too sleepy to concentrate to what you guys are saying." Zayn said leaving us 4 alone.

"Bad idea to wake Zayn up." Liam said.

"Yep. He needs his beauty sleep." I said. We all laughed together.

"I HEARD THAT!" Zayn shouted. We all turned silent then continued laughing until Louis stopped.

"Wait! I think I've got just the thing for you Ni." Louis said.

FINALLY! A plan! I just hope its good.


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Hi!

So basically... The next 1 or 2 chapters are gonna be all about "Niallie". "JilLouis" and Eleanor love triangle will be back soon.

BTW : Sorry to all the Zayn girls for making Zayn act like a douch in this chapter. I just felt like writing it. 😬

Anyways...

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