Surprise?! (Louis Tomlinson FanFic)

Chapter 40 - Hotel Room Surprise

Chapter 40

Jillian's POV

Finally. After years of being together, I'm officially Mrs. Jillian Tomlinson. 

After a lot of pictures taken with friends and family, we were guided to the limo waiting for us outside. It will lead us to the hotel to freshen up before the dinner start. 

As we got in, the driver congratulated us and told us that our belongings were on the mini drawer where Sadie left it. As I opened my phone, it was buzzing with twitter notifications. There were still a few hate messages but that didn't ruin my mood. I'm officially Mrs. Jillian Tomlinson so no one can take that away. Checking my phone, I saw a message from an unknown number. 

From : (insert random number)

Your husband is cheating on you with me... just so you know. Sorry sweetie! xx

Who can this be?

"Babe, you ok?" 

"Yeah, just... twitter." i lied.

"Leave them, they can't do anything now." he kissed me. The kiss was full of passion. The Passion that was present between us since day 1.

We talked the entire journey that didn't notice that we have already arrived at the hotel until the driver spoke up and the door opened.  

"Ok guys. Room 631 for Louis and Room 628 for Jillian." Sadie said handing us the keys.

"Wait.. separate rooms? We're married, we can share a room. " Louis said, draping an arm around my waist. 

"I know, but Jay and Karen insisted that you guys see each other with different clothes inside the ballroom so it'll be a surprise." Of course mum! 

"Ok, i'll see you later?" i asked him.

"Yeah, see you later Mrs. Tomlinson." I gave him one last kiss before we went our separate ways.

Louis's POV 

Ah here we are, Room 631. 

My suit for tonight was laying neatly on the bed. It was a white button shirt with suit pants and shoes. Nothing special but of course Mum, being herself, wanted me to change since the church outfit might be sweaty.

Typical Mum. 

I hung it first by the bathroom door and decided to strip down to my sleeveless undershirt and boxers since it was still 5:00. Reception doesn't start 'til 6. I decided to watch some TV to pass the time. I didn't notice that I fell asleep until I felt the right side of the bed dip. 

"Hey babe." the voice said as arms draped around me. 

"Well hello Mrs. Tomlinson." i said still with my back facing her.

"You have no idea how long I've been waiting for you to call me that."

Wait... that wasn't Jillian. 

"Eleanor?"

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Mwahahahaha!!! Cliffhang!!!

What the hell is Eleanor doing in Louis's room? 

I'm about to start writing the next chapter. Probably gonna be up by tonight or tomorrow night. (SCHOOL STARTS TOMORROW... AGAIN!!!! UGH!!!!) 

If I don't post it by tomorrow, it may mean that I

1) have a lot of stuff going on

OR 

2.) am too lazy (SORRY!)

Anyways.... The usual stuff....

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