Surprise?! (Louis Tomlinson FanFic)

Chapter 29 (Part 2) - LQ? (Lover's Quarrel)

RECAP : (Jill's POV)

"Louis tell me right now. Are you hiding something from me?" I asked him straight forward with my arms crossed.

"What?"

"I didn't stutter Lou. Tell me the truth, are you hiding something from me?" I asked him one more time.

Chapter 29 (Part II)

Louis's POV

"Well? I'm waiting." She said to me with a hint of anger and sadness inher voice. What did I put myself into?! STUPID LOUIS!!! Think Lou think!!!

"Umm.. well... basically..."

"Basically what?" she asked.

"Basically, I think I saw El a while ago by the aquarium. She looked exactly like El. She walked and smiled like El. I don't know."

"So? You miss her don't you?" she said with tears fighting to fall down. She closed her eyes to prevent the tears from falling but that didn't work.

"No. I don't miss her. Why would I miss her when I have someone as amazing as you?" I said as I got closer to her. I held her hand tightly as if she was about to slip away from my fingertips.

"It's just that...." she started off. She also took her hand away from mine. This is what I was afraid of.

"Just what?" I asked worriedly.

"You stopped calling me 2 months after the tour started then when I got here you've been so clingy. Now that I'm about to leave you've been distant again. Why?" Was I really that distant?

Jillian's POV

"Why?" I repeated.

"Why do you care?!" He said with his voice rising.

"I care because I'm yout fiancee and I worry about you." I said with my voice rising as well. This will surely end up as a bad misunderstanding, I'm sure of it.

"Even if you care you should give me my space. Don't be so damn clingy! Eleanor wasn't like this." he mumbled the last part.

"Excuse me?! If you want to be with your ex then go! Leave! And take this damn ring with you!" I took off the engagement ring that I grew so used to wearing and threw it at him. He stood there in front of me, frozen, looking at the ring on the floor. I think he's just registering it in his head that I might've just canceled the wedding. I got pissed at his action so I just ran pass him and out of the room and went to my brother.

Louis's POV

"And take this damn ring with you!" WAIT!!! Did she just cancel the wedding?! OH MY GOD NO!!! No no no this can't be.

Is this how it ends? What are you thinking Tommo?! Don't let it end! Oh no she's leaving... stop her stop her! Wait, my feet are stuck. #stillinshock

"Wait babe..." finally something came out but it was too late. I followed her and saw her turn right. Oh no.. that's where Liam and Dani's room is. I'm sooo dead.

Liam's POV

Harry and I went out and looked for a fast food restaurant to get take-out for our girls and us. We were about to go back to the notel when we passed through a movie and music shop.

"Li look, they have the "This Is Us" poster plastered on the wall. Let's go in and check the stuff out." Harry said. I looked inside and saw the poster. I smiled at it and nodded at Harry.

"Yeah lets." and we went in.

"Let's see what they've got." Harry said. We both split up and check the store. We saw albums of a band named Chicser. So this is the band the Filipinos were comparing to us. They don't look that bad but for me we're both different bands. I saw an only copy of our Take Me Home album. I was about to reach for it but a girl around 15-16 beat me to it.

"Hey can I ask you something?" I asked the girl sweetly.

"Sure." she answered sweetly.

"Is this Chicser band good?" I asked.

"Well, for me they're ok but I'm a huge Directioner so my standards are pretty high." she said. I smiled at her remark.

"Oh really? Well, I think I'm a bigger Directioner than you." I said.

"Oh please... try me." she said.

"Ok... Who's the latest lad who proposed to his girlfriend?"

"Niall duh! I totally ship Niallie so I'm always updated. But I ship Payzer better. Do you agree Liam?" Unbelievable! She blew my cover.

"SHHH!!!! Don't shout it out!" I whisperingly shouted. I also used my hands to cover up her mouth.

"I won't." She said through my hand.

"Thanks."

"What are you doing here?"

"Shopping."

"Oh-" she was cut off by the call of her name.

"Jasmine, let's go." a woman in her early 30s said.

"Mama can you buy me this?" so that's her name.

"Sorry hon, I don't have money with me now." she said. It broke my heart to see her on the verge of tears so I did what was right.

"Don't worry miss. Here Jasmine, I'll pay for it. Hazz and I will even sign it if you would like us to." a smile was plastered on her face as soon as I finished.

"REALLY?!?!?!"

"Yeah. Just promise me you'll never tell anyone that we're here in Manila. Deal?"

"Deal!!!" she said hugging me. I hugged her back.

"Hey Li." Harry said. As soon as Jasmine heard Harry's voice she let go of me and hugged him.

"OMG HARRY!!!" she said.

"Shhhhhh...." I warned her.

"Right. Shhhhhhh."

"Hey who's this lil gal?" Harry asked me.

"This is Jasmine. I'll pay for the CD then we can sign it." I told him

"A fan are you?"

"A huge one." she answered. We went on line and paid for the album. Her mom asked the sales clerk for a marker and we signed it.

"Thank you lads for making Jasmine's birthday special. I thought this will be her worst but you turned it around."

"Don't mention it."

"Liam?" Jasmine called out.

"Yes sweety?"

"Tell Louis and Jillian that they look really cute together. Tell them that they should never give up on each other." That was so sweet!

"I will." We both said our goodbyes to Jasmine and his mom. We were on our way out when Harry's phone rang.

"Hey hon." Harry answered. Him and Maureen are so sweet together and I won't be shocked if Hazz will be the next who'll propose.

"What?! Ok we'll be there." he said through the phone.

"What's happening?" I asked worriedly.

"It's Louis and Jill.... Jill called the wedding off."

That was not what I was was expecting.

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SO SO SO SO SO SORRY FOR THE REALLY LONG DELAY!

I was having a major headache yesterday and I fell asleep in the middle of writing this chapter.

So, I'm sorry again!

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