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Once on scene the hairs on the back of my neck stood on end. I knew I'd have to go inside the building and take another risk to place food on the table for our babies at home and my wife.
My wife..and my two rascals at home, they're the only reason I come home alive every night. I saw Captain Hammer out of the corner of my eye and decided to gather my men for instructions.
"Justin and Chase, you'll be manning the hose tonight. Good luck." I say pointing and fist bumped with them, "Paramedics Chase and Carroll with me. Mario and George, man the second hose please. Cover us men."
We separated when the cross Aly bought me was hidden under my blues jacket that was under my turnout jacket. I lightly touched the area and began to focus on the task at hand.

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