Into The Moon (Book one) ........(First few chapters need serious editing)

chapter 5

Hi guys please vote, I don’t know if this is any good so I don’t know whether to keep writing or not so please I need some input

 Leigh

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 Chapter 5

 Abby pov

I just kept staring at the same sentence over and over, nothing sinking into my head. No matter what I did I couldn’t concentrate I just kept thinking about the boy sat next to me.

 Tall, toned, bronzed, floppy dark hair falling over his face he looked like he’d stepped out of the page of a magazine, I turned my head slightly and quickly glanced at him as he looked deep in thought.

 He must be a jock I thought and popular he can’t possibly be that good looking and toned at not be one of those popular kids. As if he sensed me looking he looked up and caught me staring, oh crap how do I get out of this one as my face warmed up and turned what I can only imagine the reddest of red.

 A smirk came across his face as he leaned towards me

 “May I help?” he asked smugly

 I just froze what was wrong with me I never had problems talking to guys before

 “erm” I stuttered as his scent washed over me, it was intoxicating I felt myself closing my eyes breathing in more of him until he cleared his throat making me gasp and jump back

 "Erm I’m stuck on this problem” I lied quickly trying to cover up my embarrassment

 “Ok then” he chuckled “which bit”

 “Erm all of it, mmm well to be honest ive not really be listening or concentrating” I whispered honestly not wanting to draw any more attention to myself, this was just too embarrassing

 “Well to be honest me either” he whispered making me smile and let out a breath I didn’t even realise id been holding

 He started leaning over to be as if he wanted to say something, what if he wanted to ask me out, what if he wanted to do something, go somewhere. My body trembled and shuddered as he got closer every inch closer more shudders went down my spine causing me to tremble. How can one boy who I’ve just met possible do this to me, I wondered as he got closer and closer.

 RRRRIIIIIINNNNNGGGGG!!!!!!!!

 He jumped back into his chair and grabbed his stuff

 God damn that bell I thought as I packed all my stuff up and shoved it in my bag, not neatly I might add I just rushed having to get out of the room before I embarrassed myself anymore.

 I’d already looked at my schedule earlier so I knew I had gym next, I loved gym I was good at any sports but I never tried out for any or showed off in class, I’d done it in a few schools but soon realised high school guys don’t really dig a girl that can whoop their ass at everything and the girls just see it as showing off and do nothing but bitch. Yes I learnt my lesson id toned down the sports stuff, only doing well enough to pass the class.

 I turned to stand up and head for the gym when I bumped smack bang into a wall of muscle

 I stepped back dazed when yet again those stupid tingles and shudders told me exactly who id rammed into

 “Hey you ok Abby” he asked holding his arm out to steady me

 “Erm yeah I’m sorry, I should really look where I’m going I muttered turning and heading out towards the door