Rejected.

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A note from me to you:

This is just a new book I've been working on, let me know what you think and whether you'd be interested in reading it.

Below is a sneak peak of the first chapter.
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Her body collided with his in a tangle of arms and legs. She felt emotion rush through her entire being. Hatred, desire, blood lust. Emotions that were so foreign to her yet consumed her, defining the very essence of her being. She lost herself in his black eyes. Literally. All she was aware of was the darkness of his soul that stretched for miles and miles, never ending, never fading. If the girl were not so consumed she would have heard the guns and drones that were the very reason she had stumbled into the arms of a stranger, she would have heard her sister's cries of grief and remembered that she was on a quest, she would have looked down at her own to hands and realised that she had only ever sacrificed in her life and such immense feelings of hatred were beyond her capabilities.

Reality came hurling towards her just as the angry mob had, just moments ago. As she pushed herself from the arms of the stranger she momentarily cursed her gift. The gift that gave her the ability to see within people, to the very core of their soul

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"No" Will whispered "this can't happen. It's impossible" but it was happening. I fell to my knees utterly confused

"Will what's happening?" I asked in desperation but he seemed just as flabbergasted as I was

"I don't know" Will said, sounding as though he wished otherwise

"But I do" I looked up and saw my father there ahead of us "and child this is just the beginning".

"Your mother always said that with great power comes great responsibility and she was right. That women was the best thing in my life, your mother always saw the goodness in everyone and that was her downfall. She saw goodness in me, she believed I was capable of great power, she believed I was responsible enough but in the end it was her belief that killed her. For centuries we have been run by mate-less wolves and that is why we are one of the strongest yet cruelest packs. It was a long time ago, hundreds of years ago, when an Alpha'a mate was kidnapped, he searched the world for her and as a result he neglected his responsibilities as Alpha. After years of searching he was offered a deal, in order to get his mate the Alpha had to give up his pack and the Alpha agreed. He gave up his pack for his mate and the entire pack was destroyed, all but one. One child had survived he was considered an abomination amounts the pack for he was not only a werewolf but a witch child, his parent's had been amounts the many killed and he had burned with a need for vengeance. He sought out the Alpha who had abandoned his pack and on his way he saw a wolf maul a small child for food, he then realised how ruthless wolves were and an idea occurred to him. Using the blood of that wolf the young boy made a potion that would make the Alpha's very own wolf blood thirsty. The boy mixed the potion into the Alpha's drink and the Alpha drank it. His wolf was contaminated immediately and it sought power and dominance but he could never achieve that for the Alpha's mate was weak and the Alpha's wolf did not want to be held down. The Alpha tried to resist but in the end he killed his mate".

Once he finished the story he fell to the floor, blood dripping from his nose and mouth in astonishing amounts

"Dad!" I cried "what's happening?"

"M-my wolf" he panted "he's destroying me from within. Shanan the Alpha in the story was your ancestor. I am an Alpha and so are you, I thought running away from my Alpha responsibilities would allow me to escape the curse, so I joined this pack and acted as the pack doctor, but I was wrong. I couldn't escape it but you can" he took a moment to compose himself and then he continued

"Shanan Will is pure and he is your other half he can save you but you must choose him and let him save you and you must let your wolf go" he choked on the blood that was leaking out of his mouth

"Stop talking! Just rest we'll save you!" I looked around for so,etching that could help "Will, Jared go get someone!" They sprang into action while I sat by my father who,was now laying on the floor

"Shanan I'm sorry" the regret in his eyes was painful

"Don't be, just stay alive" I begged

"I can't but Shanan I want you to have this" he pulled out a paper and handed it to me, I didn't bother looking at it as I held

"I love you both so much" both? When I looked down at the picture I realised what he was talking about

"I love you too and I know she does too" he smiled  for the first time looking genuinely content and then nothing, not even a miracle was enough to change what happened next; he joined my mother.