This is a haiku I am thinking about submitting to my local school's literary magazine. Can you guys give me some 100% honest feedback? Thank you!
"Still"
Barren baby bed
Mother's warm palms on wet eyes
Hollow womb, hushed cries
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Pages of Unexpectedness
Random*PREVIOUSLY Temporary Art Book* Hola! Mi nombre es Liz! Just kidding, I speak English, though I am currently learning Spanish. This is my Page of Unexpectedness! I was well-inspired by my most beautiful friends, @TheNightOcelot, @Captain_Snuggawumps...
