400 Poem Challenge (completed December 26, 10:15am)

sunset

i watched through the window of the plane

as it rose above the clouds

the golden sunset ...

sunset? really?

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i watched the golden sunset

on the mirror like horizon of the ocean

as the sailboat moved quickly ...

wait a second.

how did it move quickly, on a mirror, calm ocean?

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the sun was setting behind the mountains

as the train whisked through the tunnel

...

sunset? in a tunnel?

you are losing it man.

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i could see the sun setting

as i drove east toward ...

fuck.

doesn't the sun set in the west?

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i sat on my front steps

watching the sun set on the horizon

didn't want to travel today anyway.