Hi Everyone! I will just re-announce that this will be edited. And this one already have an Sequel Hospital Love Story.
There will be changes in the story, like:
*The Cover
The last cover was a not that catchy. And it was not that colourful. Also the characters in the old cover were only Usagi and Mamoru. So I changed it to a colourful and the 6 main characters were there (Usagi, Mamoru, Ami, Rei, Makoto and Minako)*The Title
I just re-read the story and I asked my self "Why Love Story? Their Love Story just started at the end". So... I chage it to "My Crazy High School Story" In Usagi's Point of View.
*Some of the Chapters
because some has typographical and grammatical errors*Character's personality
I know the characters were out of characters specially: Mamoru, Rei, Haruka and Michiru. But the very out of character was Haruka and Michiru. I am so sorry because of that. But I will study their characters and try to make them in Character.*The Plot
Some of the story plot will be change. Because Usagi and Mamoru's closure was bit fast*The Setting
There will be some dates, places and days will be change. Or should I say all.*The Style of the story
When talking I will change from
Usagi:Mamoru-baka!
to this
"Mamoru-baka!" Usagi exclaimedWell, that's all hope you read the sequel "Hospital Love Story"
Hope you look forward the revised version.
I promise that before Sailor Moon Crystal dream arc starts this story was finished revising
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私の狂った高校の物語 (My Crazy High School Story) *Editing*
FanfictionTsukino Usagi transfered to a new school There she met a young man named Chiba Mamoru. But this guy is mysteriously cold for some reason she can't figure out. Check out Usagi and the others to their crazy yet exciting high school story. This is base...