21.) Point Of View

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You know when they say "Sarah's point of view" then they put "Bobs point of view." Its telling it from their perspective. This is a little guide to make sure you write it clean and beautiful. Buuuuutttt DONT GO ALL OVER THE PLACE!

Jeez, when you want to switch point of views that's fine. Just don't switch it Evey moment, Evey chapter. That's annoying and I tend to forget which persons point of view I'm looking from.
E.g.
Peter's P.O.V.
        She looks so beautiful I just want to kiss her.

Amy's P.O.V.
        Why is he staring at me like that?

Stranger's P.O.V.
        They will never know what I'm planning!

You see what I mean? Its annoying.

Dedicate chapters to a certain point of view.

Yeah so instead of changing it every chapter, do a chapter in a particular point of view. This way there won't be any confusion and I can actually read your book!

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